Thursday, 28 July 2016

BrightStar Chapter 13

Chapter 13

Dear readers, I'm trully sorry for taking me so long to write this chapter, but with all my heart I'll try my best to type faster, Now days has always need to study, apologize again.

The next morning Esberstark follow Ryan to George ward, Ryan leaves Esberstark in George rooms and left to school.

“You have got my letter?” Esberstark asks George. “Yeah, that why I ask you to come. I have got few ideas on what happened to Renny!” George said. “Alright! I’m all here, wait… how come you can speak?” Esberstark stop for a while. “It’s still hurt when I speak, but for Tracy. Don’t tell anyone yet.” George wants to keep this as secret yet so no one will bother him for now. “Didn’t Tracy know? she came last night.” Esberstark asks. “that what I want to talk about in today. She never came in, I was with Silver last night, Don’t know what she saw, But I think she left with anger.” George doesn't want to mention what he have done last night. “Oh! that explain it, I saw her today and she doesn't seem to be in a mood to talk about it, What were you doing with Miss Silver?” Esberstark asked. “Nothing! Let talk about Renny first!” George is a terrible liar so he changes the subject.

“alright, let's focus.” Esberstark starts this conversation.

“I’m going to tell you something happened to me when I was still in that hospital and you are not going to believe me.” George wants to make sure Esberstark don't think he is crazy first.

“ well, after the whole Tracy thing, I don’t think there will be more nonsense in this world.”Esberstark don’t think anything else will make him surprise anymore.

“Alright then, when I were still sleeping in hospital, there were a men came in and turn my machine off…” George tell every detail to Esberstark and let him know about that night. “I confirm it was real that night, Dr. Mike came in next day and ask the nurse did anyone came in and mess with my machine, The nurse have no idea, but I’m damn sure there were something wrong. Dr. Mike won't tell me, I believe he is afraid of me knowing a going to lawsuit him, I guess.” George frustrating at this point.

“I’m buying, but after that, what comes up in your brain then?” Esberstark understand George and what to continue knowing about what happened on Renny.

“So then I came up few things, I don’t think Renny did it. Maybe he did it, but not him.” George said.

“What?!” Esberstark don’t follow.

“I don’t think is Renny mind when he did it, it wasn’t himself. Also I think he have helped. I don’t think a nerd like him can do all this by himself, setting his only friend on fire, that is not any nerd can do.” George explain it better.

“So… Renny didn’t do it, who did?” Esberstark ask.

“A help form an elder in order to know this way to put away evidence, and another personality of himself.” George clear the fog.

“Renny was a psychopath?!” Esberstark got off guard.

“Come down! I don’t think he did all those killing. It just a connotation, it not necessary right!” George said.

“So… Who is the elder who help?”Esberstark ask.

“I don’t know! I wasn’t in your time! Should be you who answer this question. I’m just telling you what i think on all this after such long time. How many days left to Christmas show?” George have done his job and start to worry about his show.

“Two days, I’m afraid you don’t have much time left. Get your ass up and start Ruling your own team. I don’t think your best friend Ryan is holding on anymore.” Esberstark said.

“Shot! Two days?!” George flabbergaster and call the nurse to register going back to school.

“Gotta go, time to do my job.” Esberstark walk away and said.


Monday, 2 May 2016

BrightStar Chapter 12

Such huge moon above the sky. Moonlight shining every window in the school. Such a nice night Tracy think.
She walk her way to the ward to visit George, bring along with Esberstark letter. 
Silver wait till the nurse done checking ward and go back inside her office and take a sneak for a little nap cause the whole building only got George in there. Silver sneak into the Ward corridor before the door close and lock itself. She susccefully walk inside to the corridor and walk to George room door, she stop at his door and turn aroung and take a deep breath. She look into the glass door front of her and she fix herself, she came with ready, dress up very nice for this moment. She make her beautiful dark hair a little bit curly then usual, she let her hair down tonight to her back, that makes her more hot then her normal days with full face make up. She only put on the eyeliner tonight and with cat eye mascara, only apply very lightly, didn't make it extra long. She put on a leather white jacket and fully up zip! And mini shirt with Scotland red pattern on it, line up at the side with some bing ring chain. She didn't put on any silk stocking, just let her natrual skin out, painful high heels she only wear it when- no… She don't wear it no matter what, it deadly beautiful but dreadful painful, it has black leather lines crossing each other till her upper ankles and zips at the back of her foot heels. The rounding base line is white leather, perfect match with her jacket. 

She got herself prepared and turn back to George ward room and open the door. She walk inside and see George is sitting up holding a paper and write: I thought you were not coming. 
Silver walk to his bed and read it, “no, I've t wait till the nurse walk away… You know… So we could be alone.” Silver whisper to him just loud enough tthat he could hear. George didn't move, he just look at Silver, he coldnt pull he eyes off from her. He take up his hand and swipe down in her hair, it smooth and delicate. Silver is blushing like sunset. So she try to speak something “How do you feel? Is it too much for you? Don't you love singing?” Then silver realise she has ask a stupid questions, how could she ask him when she know he will feel sad! But he didn't. 
George write: yes, I love singing, and doc said I still have hope, just need more time. I'm worrying about you, do you mind I can't speak?

“You are so brave, why would I mind when you are already perfect?” Silver climb to his bed after saying this. 

She climb one the bed and stop at the side of George, she open her legs and lightly sit on George legs. She lean forward and kiss him. She hand herself closer to George and let her chest lay on his, she can feel his body heat pass though her jacket. No doubt George kiss her back with little French kiss, he is not a great kissing but he is enjoying it. He put his right hand on to silver upper thigh and slightly slowly moving up to her hip, she put her left hand on George chest and using her right hand to guide George left hand onto her leather jacket zip. George slowly unzip it and he take a very deep breath while he saw such magnificent round, ample, brazenly beautifully formed breast  in front of him. He froze and look at it without blinking his wide open eyes, to be honest this is his first time. Silver has come with ready, she hold his hand and bring him up to her bare firm breast and let him lay hand on her. George slowly reacting to it and slowly cupping her nice and gentle. Pressing on it and let the texture gose around in his hand. The moon light shine on her and her breast glistening on her, this is the best night George certainly never experience it before. George move away his eyes and look up to her, the moon light shine on her hair, he can see it reflecting little silver light on it. Silver see his face expression and know what he is thinking and said “Guess I still have my family blood in me.” George smile at her and swipe her hair close to his lips and kiss her hair. Then he look up and see her eyes is silver grey colour instead of honey brown like she always have, it supprise himself that he love it, he though he don't like it because it too cold. “I didn't wear colour con tonight… Bad for my eyes, it tierd to wear all day.” Silver explain to George, but she don't need to, George simply kiss her eye and move down closely and kiss her lips. Their lips lock and they are not going any where except each other lips, he continues going up to her thigh and unzip her dress. He move his whole body up and hold her against his chest and turn her over to his ward bed, George is on top of her now. He move down from her and move his hand along on her legs till her heels. He slow take off her heels and help her massage a little to help her relax, it like a natraul instinct in him telling him what to do, as he doing that he notice her ankle and foot heels is full of scars. But he let go of it and continue to relaxing her, he move back up and move his head along her body, he deep his head into her chest and feel that honey soft, tender breast she have got there. He take off her mini skirt and slowly kiss her belly and take off her underwear, his underwear as well. He lean closer to her and their belly touches each other, she gently touch on his penis and guide him close to her vigina, she whisper behind his ear "do it slow." George push his way in very slowly, Silver try to held on the pain but she still moan out a little. George stop for her, but she tell him not to. He continue his way in. Silver held the pain for her first time, but slowly she relax down and let George gose in deeper. She felt no pain any more same time she feel save with him. She realise she never going to regret this night with him, she didn't think about Mka anymore, didn't worry will George ever look at her. She is in deep love, hot love, like jump into a volcano!
Tracy arrive at the ward corridor to realise the door was lock, but of course she can just walk pass it. She pass the door and walking closer to George ward. She almost just open the door wide and walk in, but then she think of George maybe sleeping, so she peak inside to his door window and see he is with Silver, she turn around so fast and got off gaurd about what she just saw. She did not believe it so she turn around and look in again. ‘Yes! It real! I'm not dreaming… What the hXxx? He is with someone?!? Why do I care?! It non of my business! I was worry about him so sick, now I see he is just FINE! Even can do- Ah!! Son of a !’ Tracy wet on wall for no reason, she scramble the paper and thow it to the ground and walk away.
Silver sit at the side of George bed and get back to dress, mean while George grab a pencil and write down: why wear the heels when you don't like them?’
“So I could dance behind Mka, so I could be around you!” Silver answer him after reading it. 
Write: your eyes it so much beautify then I thought It would be, it like snow flakes in the air, keep it for me would you?
“You mean don't wear colour con?”
Write: it bad for your eyes anyway. Please?
“For you, anything!”
George give her a goodbye kiss and she walk away. She stop at the front of the door when she open the door. She pick up the scramble paper and bring it to George. “I think this is yours” silver pass it to George and go back to her hostel. 
George look at the letter and he know it, he can feel Tracy was here. He feel a strange feeling bumping from his heart like he have done something wrong. 

Sunday, 1 May 2016

BrightStar-Chapter ten to eleven

Chapter 10

“Shh…!” Someone is using his hand to cover George face. George open his eyes wide but he couldn't see much! It so dark everywhere! What happening? How would a hospital turn all the light off? “Hush… Come down… It no use for you to struggling right now, I meant no harm… For now!” The unknow s talking to George in a very creepy way. George can't see who he is, he want to breath faster but he have no contral, the machine is don't it for him. “How about doing this nice and slow… Shall we?” The man walk to George mechanical ventilators and turn it down to give less oxygen to George, that make George feel so weak and dizzy. “Here is the thing… Mr Stoneking… Why are you so interested to Tracy Kesinger? She should be died! What make you bring this after twenty years? How did you understand this incident? It should be stay hidden,I wrote in the letter said I'll kill everyone in your life, what makes you think it still works after twenty years? No… It not just because the letters… What else drive you to this… I'll find out! George Stoneking.” He run to George machine and turn it off, George feel awful and start struggling. 

“George!” George open his eyes and it dark night already, everything look the same as normal in the hospital. He look up and see such beautiful hair waving on him and he blink more few times and focus, the blur pass away from his eyes and see it Wellen Silver, “Oh hey! I thought I told Ryan tell no one to come?” George think, he stil can't speak and his face turn angry because of that. “Is it you don't wish to see me? I can go now!” Silver startled after seeing his face turn angry. George shake his hand in the air thinking no no no! “I… Guess that a no?” George nodd to her and realise it was a bad idea. The pipe that connect to his neck cause him deadly painful, his tears running out from he eyes within not his contral. “Are you okay…? Why are you crying?” Silver have no idea what to do. “George can't speak, he wave his hand like he is writing, “Oh! You want to write?” Silver pass the paper to George that Ryan left there. 
George write: Sorry I didn't mean to scared you, what time is it? Is dangerous if you come this night. 

“It fine… I think you are more dangerous considering your situation… It around 10 half now, we have done rehearsing after 10 o'clock, it close to school here, just twenty minutes away, I walk here, silver answer his questions to comfort him. She look at George eyes and attracting by it, George didn't move away his eyes either, George is paying so much more attention to Silver. In a way he doesn't know, he is lening froward to her little by little… He blink away and write down

Is your hair brunett or black? 

“Haha, it dark brunett, just got few pink highlight to make a illution that is black, my whole family 
Have silver hair… I'm the only one who have dark hair… they caught surprise when I was born like this… Where are your parent?” Silver explain to him. 
George write: I like your hair, makes you special in your family!
I love brown eyes more then grey, seem to cold. 
My parent is on a Reincarnation Concerts, can't come, but they have been notice.
“Oh… Thank you I guess… That very nice of you, I'm sure your parent have no choice but to no coming. Um... Look! I make you this bracelet… For better luck…” Silver pass the bracelet over very shy and show to George. It a very delegate work on it, shine white boned with light sky blue, with dark blue at the side boned with black. It about one inch wide. George love it! He pull up us left hand and let Silver put it on. “To want it? Really?” Silver get off gaurd and very glad that George want it. George nodd to her and rise his hand more, she gentlely put the bracelet on to him, it was surprisingly fit! Her face is blushing like a cherry. “It matches your eyes, as I aspect.”
George write: thank you very much, I love it. It pretty late now, you want to go back to your hostel?
“Yeah Sure…” Silver don't want to go that soon, she want to spend more time with him. 

Write: help me ask one more question before you go, did anyone else came to my room?

Silver went to look for a nurse and ask. 

“The nurse no one came…” Silver sit George bed by his leg, and look into him. “So… Bye… Se you soon I guess…” She stand up and leave his bed, but she sit back down for a second and turn to George and kiss him. George didn't srink, he kiss her back with a little toungless kiss, gently use his tounge touch her inner upper lip. Just for two seconds Silver hearts was already bumping like a running bourse. She push George away and stand back up. “Um… Bye!” Silver walk away from his room and go back to her hostel. 

She stand by his room door and turn back tell him “the nurse also tell me the doctor will come tomorrow morning to see can you get off from your machine, and move you to our nurse office and let you rest there.” 

George nodd at her and lay back down, no though, after two seconds he fall at sleep again.

Chapter 11

“Good morning Mr Stoneking! You ready?” The doctor has come to help George get off from the mechanical ventilator. “That strange…” The doctor read the printing data records from the machine found something pop out. He whisper to the nurse but George can still hear the nurse answer. ‘No… No one came to touch it.’ Then George knows… It was real last night. 
After putting out the machine George is good to transport him to the school ward. When he arrive, Mka was already there when he get in his ward. Silver and Snow is behind Mka. Once George notice Sliver was there he couldn't put his eyes away from her. Silver try her best to avoid eye contact with George. She don't want Mka to find out that she like him too. 
Mka keep talking, keep asking how is George, George know Mka is just trying to take care of him, but a minute of silence would be great.
Finally, the school bell ring, Mka have to leave. She fight so hard to leave George alone. Silver walk behind her, George grab her hand lightly very fast and put a peace of paper in her hand. Silver got flabbergaste and run away with Mka.


“I'm sorry I couldn't be there with you.” Tracy keep apologising to Esberstark while she is listing to him what happened. 
“It alright! Stop apologies to me, I'm not the one who got poision, that kid safe my life, got to go thanks him later. You visiting him ?” Esberstark ask Tracy. 
“Yeah I'm going tonight, I'm sure he need more time to adobt. I think is too much for anyone.” Tracy understand George feeling. 
Esberstark keep silence, he still feel guilty about this. It could have been him, he should be the one who laying in the hospital. Not George. 
“Hey! It not your fault! You tried your best, he is still alive because of you, don't take this on you. Did you get a new clue then?” Tracy try to change the subject, “No… It was another dead end… that bastard play us, but there is a high chance Renny is the one who killed you, but there are some part dosnt make sence. The cover of the letter Renny wrote, his mom said it his writing, after I open the envelope his mother didn't recognise his writing anymore.” Esberstark point it out.
“Is that mean Renny didn't kill me?” Tracy still have hope in Renny. “Is Renny maybe force to write that envelope and the killer write the letter?”
“No… Doesn't add up. I mean who would kill a girl and do so much for it, no ones gonna find out anyway, he could have just walked away. Why do so much unless there is more reason.” Esberstark still don't think all this were just coincident. 
“Well… As you said it was a dead end. How you gonna find out?” Tracy ask. 
“Give this to George, it the letter, I meme rise it and write it down. Maybe he can think out of something.” Esberstark pass the paper to Tracy. 
“Alright! I'll give it to tonight.”Tracy said. 


“Good morning Mr Stoneking! You ready?” The doctor has come to help George get off from the mechanical ventilator. “That strange…” The doctor read the printing data records from the machine found something pop out. He whisper to the nurse but George can still hear the nurse answer. ‘No… No one came to touch it.’ Then George knows… It was real last night.

After putting out the machine George is good to transport him to the school ward. When he arrive, Mka was already there when he get in his ward. Silver and Snow is behind Mka. Once George notice Sliver was there he couldn't put his eyes away from her. Silver try her best to avoid eye contact with George. She don't want Mka to find out that she like him too.

Mka keep talking, keep asking how is George, George know Mka is just trying to take care of him, but a minute of silence would be great.

Finally, the school bell ring, Mka have to leave. She fight so hard to leave George alone. Silver walk behind her, George grab her hand lightly very fast and put a peace of paper in her hand. Silver got flabbergaste and run away with Mka.

Sunday, 3 April 2016

BrightStar chapter nine

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He open the envelope and stay reading. 

Dear You!
  I cAn See yoU have FouNd mE! An-Hahaha-waha. MeAns you hAve aGrEE tO pLay ThIs gAme! WhaT GamE? I muRdEred TRACY KESINGER! ThaT thE gAme! YES… NoW you must PLAY oR eAcH PersOn yOu cARe WilL DIE! 

 RuLE Is siMpLe! FoLlOw the CluE! You Can’t yOu DiE! LoOk CareFul eVerY thInG arOUNd you! THe GAMe is ON!

NoW, Let PlAy! How MuCh yOu WilL dO to FiNd ouT?

P.s hoLd On tO mE. 

13th MaRch, 1998

“That it?” George grab the letter away from Esberstark hand, Esberstark grab it back and stare straight  at George eyes, “You want more people to die?!” Esberstark almost cramble the letter to chatter pieces, “No-nono no… This is not Ren-ny, this is not him. He never speak like this.” Mrs Dalton tears never stops rolling, she keep using her hand to wipe her tears but her face is still wet like a towel soak in a bowl of water, Mr Dalton try to hold his tears as hard as he could so he could give his wife a bit more comfort. “What he mean by the game and he killed a inocent girl?” Mr Dalton ask Esberstark at the same time he put his wife in his chest so she could use his shoulder. BOOSH!

  Boosh! The letter turn on fire itself! When Esberstark temp to let go, “No! Hold on to me! Remember?” George remind Esberstark and hold his hand so he would stop him to shake it off. Chssssss… The fire burn out slowly, a small paper left in his palm, George let go of Esberstark hand and take the paper. “Give me your hand!” Mr Dalton ask Esberstark. Esberstark hand it over, Mr Dalton put his hand in to the ice Lemon, “it should help you stop burning, it not serious, just the surface skin, not yet the fat layer and muscle, put burning cream will heal.” Mr Dalton is a retired E.R. Doctor, Esberstark hold the ice lemon on his other hand and walk aside so George can't see his painful face. 

George continue the game, it written:

You havE mAde it tO lEvEl tWo!
I stand here all the time,
Just tO let you see me when I'm on you mind.
I keep Your frozen moment,
You put me in your apartment.
The day I start learning,
Is the time I start falling.
What am I?

*it my ever first time riddle, forgive of it sucks.

‘Please don't turn in fire again…” George is praying in his heart. “Do you know what it means?” Mr Dalton ask George. “It just a riddle, give me a minute!” George begin to think, ‘I stand here all the time… Mean something don't move… Just to let you see me when I'm on your mind… “What on your mind now?” “My son” … He look for his son in photo! The frame! Frozen moment! A picture! Start learning… The school. The one Mr Dalton look at!’ George run to the frame and look at the image, he turn it at the back take the picture out, bingo! There is the new message! He notice this paper at the bottom is year in another, George read it with Mr Dalton:

I’m violet to purple rare be white and yellow,
See me by the side of the window.
When the time I fallen to the ground,
I stay with you all around.

P.s. Dig Me

“Wow… That so easy! Pretty obvious right?” He laght by himself and look around… No one is laughing with him, he put one hand behind his head and scratch his hair, he tur around so quick again to the window, ‘see me by the side… There! Purple flowers!’ He run outside of the room and look for the flower, Esberstark give the ice lemon back to Mr Dalton and run with George.  

“Sea lavenders! Your ex girlfriend favroutie!” George point his both hand to the flowers. “Dig it?” Esberstark ask George, “yep! That what the massage said!” Geroge rise his shoulder and pull up both of his hand and flap back his hand on his putter thigh, as the moment Esberstark temp to start, “what on earth you trying to do now?” Mrs Dalton come out from her apartment. “I'm sorry Mrs Dalton, but the message request to dig up this flower.” Esberstark explain, “please! Is the only thing I've left from my son! He planted this before he left.” George can see Mrs Dalton eyes is so red that you almost can't see her eye white, she cried to hard. Mr Dalton come along.“My apology, but I have my own green house garden that take care of all sea lavender inside, I assure you I will take well care, after digging it I will personally help you place it back.” Esberstark put his right hand against his chest and his left hand put behind his back and lower his head to Mrs Dalton. Mrs Dalton put down her hand from her chest and take a deep breath and nod, she turn around walk back to her house, before she open her door “just to let you know, I'm doing this for Tracy, but I don't want anything to against my son!” She open the door and go back infoor, didn't even look back. “It alright to tell us what you have found after this, it better than no knowing” Mr Dalton wish even his son is become a different person but he is still his son and he still love his son. He walk in side also. 

Mean while George look around, ‘that all?...just that easy?... No no, something is mising… This is wrong… How could all this just be that simple? If it that easy… Why riddles? … p.s dig me… Won't that just going to be telling me the answer? … The time I fallen… Oh my god!’ Gregor stop thinking and start running back to Esberstark as fast as he could, “No! Stop! Stop! Get off!” Esberstark didn't react fast enough, psssssst! George push Esberstark away! “What the- you? Hey! George!” George lay on the grass choking, he couldn't responds, it was poision gas, George save Esberstark in time but he breath in the poision, soon he can't even caught, he face up to the sky and lying there, he can't breath… Faintng dealing with out oxygen… “George! Lord… What should I do?” Esberstark shake George so keep him wakeup, George use his last strength to point at the digging spot, another message! 

You forgot the paper two…
When the time YOU fallen,
I will stay with you all around.
Guess where I'm at. 
P.s you have 45 second. 

“Oh lord! 45 second, 10 second pass already…” Esberstark stand up and look around, around… Jesuse! Then thanks god he notice at one bar of the fence is planted a sea lavender. He rush to it and see a tiny nife mark writing “break me” he didn't think much, he use all his force to try break it, he try to use his hand but he just got a burn, it hurt like hell! He is kicking it but the while fence is to strong! 20 second pass...15 seconds left… “Ahhhhhhh)))))))))))))) break!!!!!!!” Esberstark push as hard as he could! 5 seconds left!!! “Bloody … What are you doing?!?” Mr Dalton come out and see what going on with the loudness, he was shocked by seeing bleeding hands on his harder fence and George lay on floor not moving, he go straight at George and check his vitals, “honey! Call an ambulance! Detective! What cause this?!” Mr Dalton try to understand the situation before doing any decision, “it was poision! Gas on-e!  Ah! I have to break this! 20 seconds over!” Esberstark speak as he push. Bang! A clear song come from the broken fence and a bottle of glass fall on the grass, it size amount as a finger, clear, pure liquid inside appear as violet. Esberstark rub his blood on his hand and pick up the bottles run to George, he pass the battle to Mr Dalton so he could save George life, Mr Dalton smuge the blood on the bottle away and see “oral”, he open George mouth and pore into George mouth, it 60 second over… Mr Dalton start CPR right away, ‘wake up… Wakeup… I'm not going to let my son kill one more person’ Mr Dalton Keep thinking. George still not breathing…


Again thank you for reading!


The ambulance arrive, the paramedics have to push the epi twice and shock him twice to get George back, lucklil he have been reacting to the IV, George is safe now.

Beep… Beep… Beep…
George wakeup from the sound of his ECG, burning in his throat and chest, he look down and see there is a huge plastic pipe go in to his neck. He panic and confuse about what happening, he follow the pipe and see it connect with a huge machine that bumping air to his lung. He trying to speak but he couldn't, he start struggling and move around. “Mr Stoneking, please stop moving. I'll help you call the doctor, but please stay still.” The nurse walk away.
“Easy… George… I'm your doctor, Dr Mike, I can see you have awake! And please let me explain, you were in an accident, you breathed in poision gas that will corros you respiratory system and causing you to got in cardio arrest, but you got luck! Your friend found a cure to purefied your poision, but you damage throat and lungs will remain. I have done a sugrey on you and I stop the bleeding, but you will need this tube for few days, this tube is connected to the machine name mechanical ventilators, you may experience such pain in your body, so I suggest if you really can't stand the pain you can click the nurse button anytime and ask for morphine. Nod if you understand.” George bump his head into the pillow hard and hold his feast so hard that can blow up an apple, “alright than! Your friend is outside, you want me to send him in?” George just nod.

“Hey dude!” First thing Ryan said after he come in. He came in with wet messy hair and full of water drops on his leather jacket. “Woah! You look like crab! You breathing in this?” Ryan teasing George again. George want to talk back but he can't.
“Yeah! It raining outside,outside, rain like hell now, everything turn so dark and seems so different. No idea what going on. I get it, you still want to sing, but the doc said you need more time to recover, no time to catch up open day. I'll keep helping you to ask Tracy.” Ryan seems like total understanding why George is thinking. George feel relief after hearing Esberstark is fine and he wants to get out if hospital as fast as he can. So he could catch up with his team. “The girl are doing fine, but they-well is not ‘they’ but Mka you know, she only obey to you, so she gave an order only dance when you and your guitar are here. She is so piss at you about when you lie to her that you were coming back soon and you did not.” Ryan explain what else is happpening. George pull up his right hand and smash on his fore head and swipe down his face. He hold up his hand and swing in the air like he is writing, “Oh! You want to write?” Ryan grab a pack of paper at the table that next to George bed’s. 

‘I'll come back as soon as I can, help me ask Mka can she help me teach Tracy dance, if she can't she will learn playing guitar and practice her singing skills from me find Esberstark and tell him to come by. No need anyone else to come visit.’

“Alright… That simple...anything else?”

Give this to Mka if she still hate you’

       I'm so sorry, will you trust me again?’

“Alright! Got to go! Good luck with you new look man!” Ryan couldn't stop teasing him.

‘Get off! Wipe yourself dry before coming in!”

“Haha! Yeah sure! Let me take a pic of you before I go!” 

George scrumble a peace I paper he just wrote and throw it to Ryan, to late. He still take a picture of him.

After Ryan walk away everything seems so quiet, only his heart beat is beeping at the back ground, only other sound is the rain taping on the window, he look outside, brain was right, everything turn so dark like the evil is coming…


“What the hell?! Noway I'm gonna dance without him!” Mka is thrill after listening to Ryan, Ryan got no more words to say so he pass the paper George write to Mka, she calm down after reading it. “Alright… We will dance…” Mka finally agree on Ryan, “oh one more thing, can you teach Tracy to dance?” Ryan ask very nicely. “Yeah sure! She look great anyway!” She answer without doubt. “Really? You would?” Ryan got off gaurd, “yes! What wrong with that?” Mka rise her eyebrows. “Nothing!” Ryan turn around so fast and get ready for the practice, “practice till 10 tonight!” Ryan order.

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Friday, 11 March 2016

BrightStar chapter seven, eight

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Chapter seven

Last chapter:
“So… Where is that Tracy now?” Mka ask George with a little bit envy in it. “When she is done she will come here” as he speak Tracy run in to the hall. “I know who is the reflection!!! It Renny!” Tracy scream as she run in. “Who?” George asked.

“It Renny! He studies science, mostly spend time in labtory.” Tracy say more after she arrive and stop running. “The nerd!” Esberstark help George clear his question mark on his face. “He was a science student, always stay in the labtory do experiment and cauclatetion. Tracy always has been nice on him, he was isolate by others because of his intelligence.” Esberstark explain everything. “But there is no way he could killed me, he is such a great person.” Tracy clear for Renny. “Only one way to find out!” George suggest. “Let go find him! He should be like… 40 something like you?” George ask Esberstark. “Do you know his address?” Tracy look in to Esberstark and ask him. “You have ask the right person. Wait here, I'll go get it. I'll be back.” Esberstark jog away and left them here. “So… Gather up!” Don't waste anytime! Practice makes perfect!” George keep being a leader. “You still in a mood to play music even after all this?” Tracy ask George. “Why not? We are falling way behind!” George really wants this show to be perfect. “Do you have any idea how importants this show is? It HUGE! It gonna let our principle to decide our team go or the frankins go to the championship of or state! Which is why I need to recruit a singer! A bright star! You!” George explain to Tracy why he need her so much. “Mka can sing for you!” Tracy try to pass the ball. “She..ah...she can't sing, they all sing horrible.” George feel embarrass when talking about the girls. “They only have the look and dance, please! Sing with me!” George beg her. “How is anyone going to see me, I'm dead remember?” “You sheet music! Once we touch we can see you, same as the audience!” “How you gonna make everyone to touch it?” “ I've few ideas, I can pull this off” George end the conversation. “I'm back!!!” Esberstark run back into the hall from the cave he made. “I've got the address here, I never suspect him, after all he is just a lab guy. We can go take a visit.” Esberstark suggest a quick way. “I'll go with you!” George don't want to loose any chance to help Tracy to find out what happens. “Stay with me!” Mka grab George’s hand and try to make him stay. But George just push her hand off and says he will be back soon and walk with Esberstark. Mka standing there start feeling little jealous of Tracy now.

Chapter eight

So, Esberstark and George arrive at Renny apartment that Esberstark was hold. It was a truditional house that have three floors anda triangle roof top with a grace iron gate auroing the huge garden.Look from outside you can see the whole building is build from braicks which looks brownies the garden seems well care be there is no any other plants except for grass that trim to perfect land like what you see in golf. “But George notice at the side if the house the little coner grow a small little flower there, George recognise it the flower that Tracy like! The sea leavender! “ exactly you going to ask the questions?” George have no idea how to do this anymore. “Like this! Watch me!” Esberstark lead his way and  ring the bell, after a minutes a old lady comes to answer the door, “yes? Who is this?” The old lady use her old age sound to ask. “Good afternoon lady, I'm detective Esberstark and this is my partner George, we have come a long way to look for Renny and ask about the incident twenty years ago. Do you mind we talk to your son? Esberstark says it like he was actually a detective. (To remind, Tracy stays in school because she have no way to get outside of the school) George is so nervous about this pretending, so he stay quite and follow Esberstark lead. “My son is gone!” A old man come behind the old lady says it. “I'm so sorry about this, would you like to come in first?” The old lady apologise for her husband rudeness. “Yes, please!” Esberstark feel greatful.

George follow Esberstark and he start to look around the house, it just perfect! What I mean is everything is putting where exact it belong! The carpet on floor you can see it has some age but it still clean and warm colours, plate that is rare and expensive collection is put inside the cupboard clean and in order. As they walk inside the old lady talk to them. “I'm Renny’s mom, you can call me Mrs Dalton, he is Renny’s father. This is our house. As you see I'm a 64 years old lady. I hope you can understand.” Renny's mom explain to George who she is.

  They have arrive the resting room of the house and Esberstark sit down where Mrs Dalton lead them. “My son Renny disappear after Tracy incident. I've no idea where is he now.” Mrs Dalton tell the answer before Esberstark even ask, “he was gone after two years of Tracy dead to be excect. Tracy was such a nice girl, she walk home with Renny few times for his project, they can make such a great art. She has been his only friend, hey are good friends and there is no reason my boy will hurt her, don't even mention about killing her.” Mrs Dalton eyes start silence cry with rolling tears. George feels sorrow about this scene, same as Esberstark, but still he have to keep on asking before Mrs Dalton change her mind to answer anymore qeustions. “Did Renny say any things or acting weirded before and after the incident?” Esberstark acting is such a profession. He can see Mrs Dalton eyes is dropping tears, but she stop sniffing and her eyes motion for a second. Then he knows she is bidding something. “He was all up high at that time in his brain.” Mr Dalton spilt it out. Mrs Dalton close her eyes shut and few drop of tears fall out to her cheeks, “oh please! Stop, he was such a good boy, he did nothing wrong.” She whisper. She is still blind with the love to her son. “Help yeah! He was such a good boy that put those needles in his godame veins. The definition now days are way different.” Mr Dalton is getting so angry now. “What make you say that? Was he not souber?” George ask. “Hell yea! He couldn't even tell me did he eating his dinner, spending all his money to buy those shit, I spend all my life on him and that what I got for return.” Mr Dalton say nothing good to Renny, but for the real reason that he is so angry is because he love his son so much that he don't believe the drugs is going to take his son away just by that easy. He use anger to replace forgiveness to fill the hole in his heart. He need the fresh air so he walk upstiars.  Left Mrs Dalton all alonesitting at the sofa. “There is no report saying your son take any medication , why is that?” Esberstark check the files agin and there were no mention about Renny drug addicts problems. “No one ever notice Renny, everyone just see the surface of the incident, they were all looking at Lyon and other Bulliers. I wish they have ask so they could help my son before I notice it was to late.” Mrs Dalton regret so much about she couldn't help her son sooner.
 “Do you know what drug he was taking?” George asks. “No… Even if I don't know what drug he was taking, If I know that he was even touching it, I would have stop him. He never talks about anything that bothers him or making him stress. But I knew he was having trouble with making friends, which is why I'm happy that Tracy was his friend!” Mrs Dalton feel abit comfort after memorizing of the memory of Renny. “Do you mind we go take a look of your sons room?” Esberstark ask nicely. “Yea sure! The second door to the left at second floor. I didn't change his placement, things stays the same as he was gone, I clean up the dust some times.” Mrs Dalton show the way. “Why no change?” George have just ask such an rude question. Mrs Dalton stand there froze. “Do you mind make us a drink?” Esberstark help him get out of this tragic moment, “yea...sure… I have lemon ice…, I'll go get some.” Mrs Dalton walk to the kitchen. “You fool! Are you out of your mind?! Why on earth did you ask that question?” Esberstark teaching George a lesson. “What? Why not?” George still don't understand. “Parents never give up! They never stop loving their child, most case missing child, the parents keep everything In place so when thier beloved child come home they can come back to thier home again. Even some case they got bad news, they will still keep it, so if you ask this kind of stupid questions again. Not just make them a hard time, also pointing there is no hope. Get it?” George nod to show he understand.

They walk upstairs and George look around to satisfied his curious. Wood floor steps on for the stairs cover with the finest carpet to warm up the cold tone in house, lighten up they way with rice white wall paper with hidden rose printing with slightly darker colour. Last decorating with simple frame on the wall, but the picture weren't simple! They are Mr Dalton and Mrs Dalton loving travel posture around the world, there were few pictures with Renny inside, but all without Mr Dalton.

George finish the sniffing and walk in with Esberstark to Renny's room. They were not surprise. All science stuff in the room, blackboard for the wall to cauclate the physic, formula for the chemical, a wood board for sticking picture for the research of the creatures. Poster around the room of different scientists. Lot of science project around the lab table, I'm serious, there is a lab table in his room. It a vast, huge variety room, image a room can put a adult bed, a huge bookcase, a lab table, and a huge desk for study. And planty of place for science and art project put on floor. Done thinking? Yea excectly, must be expensive. “She is right! He is a good boy.” Mr Dalton looking at a picture sitting at Renny bed and said. Mr Dalton standup and put the picture where it was placed, George can slightly see it a picture of Mr Dalton and Renny stanging front of the school gate. Guess it the first day of school.

Esberstark walk to the studying desk and notice it was strange, all books in room is placed at the bookcase, but only this science book put here on desk very neat, no papers for note, no pen using, so he take a closer look, he sees a lot of memo at the science book, he have no interested for studying it, but he row down and read there is a word pops up, each memo is writing with black or blue pen, but he saw there is a mark with green written ‘Letter’, Esberstark open that page, yes no trick, there is an letter, Esberstark pick it up and show to Mr Dalton. “It Renny writing! How could have I missed it for all this long?” Mr Dalton recognise it Renny writing and stuns by what he have missed for twenty years. “Oh my! God have mersy, what is the letter about?” Mrs Dalton come up with four cups of lemon ice on a silver tray, she almost faint when she heard this news, George react fast and help her hold the tray and Mr Dalton give his shoulder to her.

“Let see what is this about” Esberstark start reading the letter.


Friday, 4 March 2016

Brightstar part four, five and six

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  The story has come to Tracy and Esberstark finally meet each other. Their conversation continue...

  "Why I haven't see you around in school?" Tracy ask Esberstark to find out more, "I have no idea, it fate I guess." Esberstark puzzle in his own brain. "How see your world look like?" "It was not clear, it wa blur can't focus. I can't remember what happens, I don't have my memorise, don't know who I am can't reginise anyone, I try to call out but I can't! The way I died is causing my respiratory system so weak, I don't feel hungry but I felt my sheet music was the only things that importants to me. I hold on to it, and each time I'm lost, there will be a strong feeling from my sheet music and tell me where to go. After giving times. I can breath, speak, even sing. Then I can start hearing things, people talk, laugh, cry, calling out. It all surounding me. Took me long time to learn how to not hearing them. After this wonderful time, the nightmare begin. I was swollen back to where I was traped. Back in that room. Dark. Cold. Alone. It like I still have a purpose in there. So I calm myself and search aroung in that room." "Wait! Do you know how long is that after you die?" George interrupting her again. "I don't know, I told you it was fussy. I guess it already five years later. Cause everyone dress different already. No the same way we dress," Tracy look into Esberstark eyes. "So I traped in that room again, I saw you walked out of that room, I stayed and wait for you, everything is happing all over again, when I get scared it get fussy again, the more not clear they are, the more I got scared. I do not think I can contral it, I know cause I've tried dos many times already, I guess my emotion will stay the same as I died." Esberstark hold Tracy toward to his chest and hug her very hard. "Don't be. I here now..." Esberstark clam Tracy down and try to protect her from hurting again. "Ah..." George try to speak. "Did I tell you to shut your mouth?!?" Esberstark got impatient for George rudeness. "No! I have an idea, Tracy, do you think you can go back and see what heppened?" George ask her for his smart ass "Yeah! I think so, but I've put lot of times to get out of there."  Tracy feel forceful about this. "How did you manage to get out of there?" Esberstark worried for her so he ask him to be sure. "I wait! I what till the thing pass on as the way they happened. Thing in there get more clear each time I got out of that room, so each time things get more clear for me to understand. I got carry out by the fire man. I able to get of that bed anytime when after get out of that room, but I never able to get out if this school, when they leave the school the bed I lie on will disappear and I fall on the floor. It like there is a huge forcefield blocking me out. " Tracy tell Esberstark what happened and going to happens. "Honestly I think gerige plans will work. But is it gonna be too much for you?" Esberstark is worrie for Tracy. "If it works, I want to do it, if it can really help me get out of this place. Yes!" Tracy said it with pleasure. "How did you came to my show at open day?" George want to understand more, "I saw and gear lot if people taking about the open day, and they also mention about you and your bang. Labels everywhere saying you gonna be the show main show. So I wonder since my word is getting more clear why not go see something new, so on that day, I follows the peoples,  walked in that hall. That how we meet!" Geroge feel it such a amazing journey she got there. "Alright then. Shall we beggin?" Esberstark suggested.

bs chapter6

  Geroge leads the way climbing out of the cave, Esberstark close the gate and begin to climb the way out, “Tract follow me, Geroge stay the last! no way I'm gonna let you fall and get us all killed” Esberstark say this to George for humiliate him in front of Tracy. Geroge has no chance to fight back so he climbs up in silence.

Since going down is already hard, no way climbing up will be easy. Although it hard for them, Esberstark has climbed this rock tunnels for 20 years. Sure he is capable of this easy level.

Half way at the tunnel now, such dark and wet in there, George have no choice but to put his creapy phone flashlight away and use full hand to climb, but once he put it away he regret it. It is so dark that he can only see the light from Esberstark flashlight such far away. “Ah!!!” Tracy calls out. She trip and slip her legs, luckily George reacts fast enough so he can spear an empty hand to support her, there is the awkward moment… His hand is putting at a wrong place at Tracy … Tracy secure herself “thanks, I guess” Tracy try to climb  to as fast as she could so she could get out of this awkward moment. “sorry I didn't mean to I was just trying to help.” George trying to explain to Tracy, but Tracy ignore him and keep climbing. She didn't scroll at him because her ex-boyfriend is up there, and for all of their sake, she don't want them to be dangerous just because she get angry. But all in George head his just thinking she's kind of real for a ghost.

finally, they have arrived at their tunnel exit. Esberstark pushes that tree trunk and gets his feet back on land.Esberstark pull out his hand and help Tracy goes up and walk away go on a reach to the school. “hey... anyone help me out?” George still traps in the tunnel alone. Why am I even here? I'm just playing the guitar… He thinks for awhile and he climbs up to the whole himself. He closed off the tree trunk and follow up, he was falling way behind.

 As they are running to the room that Tracy died. George speed up and speak to Tracy and whisper “hey! Are you ready for this?” George is worrying for Tracy. “what do you mean? We are on our way now! I can't back out right now.”Tracy don't want to say no for now, either she wants to she already said yes at the cave and there's no turning back now. “I mean. If it's me normal for anyone to accept this much in such a short while.” George just trying to cut her some slack. “Well, I'm not someone and is not too much I've waited for 20 years. And Esberstark was my boyfriend he is just older doesn't mean he's not the same person. I don't want to hurt his feeling.” Tracy tries to put all this in a normal view, “is that what you mean? After 20 years you still love him?” Geroge got envy about this, “No!”Tracy shout out than she turn her voice down and whisper “I didn't mean by that, it just, he Was my boyfriend, it been twenty years, I don't expect this to happens, it just!” Tracy can not explain her feeling to Esberstark. “You still love him, but just not like the way you use to be?” George helps her to express. “Yes… Just not like I use to be…” Tracy feel is guilty about this so she look away from George's eyes and look down. “anything wrong you can talk to me, you know that right?” George holds her hand and face to her but she shake his hand off from her hand and say “I don't need to, and why Tom can see me after you pass him that sheet music?”Tracy starting to get irritated that she scream so angry but secretly she got a happy feeling of George warn hand and her heart starts beating again. She has not Idea why this is happening. “I don't know... how can I know?!” George not sure himself also. “Why Ryan and the others can see me? did you show them aswell?” Tracy asked George for a quick answer, “ Oh shot! I gave it to Ryan so he could take a good look, then he said he wants to study it.” George has no idea what he have done. “How much you want to bet he shown to others?” Tracy finally clears her clouds now. “We have to go seek out! We should go ask Ryan!” George panic. “I think you go alone and ask will be enough.” Esberstark comes us from nowhere, Tracy and George got flabbergasted. “When did you got here? When you start to listen?” Tracy asks him. “When you said your don't to hurt my feeling?” Esberstark answers her question with out feeling, he doesn't want Tracy to feel guilty about it. “Oh… Huh…” Tracy has no idea what to say. George is smirking at the conner. “We should keep going!” Esberstark suggest. “I thought you want to spread up!” George mans up and ask Esberstark. “I was saying if you want to go, you can go as much as you want! But I'm GOING TO STAY WITH TRACY!!!” Esberstark shouts at George to express his feeling. “Who said I don't want to stay with her? Do I want to find out what happens to her, why you always pick on me? What wrong. Huh? Better say it now before I punch your face!” George spilt it out in one second. “This is not personal, and I'm just trying to get the truth out also. But you are really not HELPING AT ALL!!! What make you think your sweet ass can punch me?!? Is that what you want ?!? A fight?!?” Esberstark pretends  he was not feeling anything about what Tracy said, but actually, he is hurting like hell in his heart, feels like his heart was like a rock keep falling from a well. “Now THAT is personal!!! I'm not scared to fight with an old Man, grandpa!” George can't hold back, he is being up a fight. “I'm just 48!” “You look like you are older than 70.” George rush to Esberstark and push him on the floor. Pulling up his hand and try to punch Esberstark face. “Stop it!! Both of you, you two are driving me crazy!” Tracy calls out and walk on, “we are going TOGETHER!” Tracy ignores them both and keep on. Esberstark push away George and throw him on the ground and walk with Tracy, George sits on the ground looking at Esberstark back and pull up a pack of grass temp to throw at Esberstark, but he change his mind and throw a pack of grass away and stand back up.


Finally, they arrive the hallway of the music room, "You ready?" Esberstark asks Tracy, Tracy nodded her head. "I will be right at your side, okay?" Esberstark walks in with her, George helps them to led the way and open the door, the moment he twist the handle "George! What the hell are you doing here? You said you'll be back! where were you? I looked all over the school."Ryan runs to George and gives him a good hug, "Yeah, I was walking with Tracy" George is thrilling to see his Bestfriend. "Come on, let head back, our show is dying because of you. I'm no good leader." Ryan says it very frustrating. "Do you mind wait for a bit more? just a for a sec." George want to talk before going with Ryan "Tracy begins now, don't wait for me. Esberstark will do the work." Then he turn around and run with Ryan." who is that old man?" Ryan asks Geroge. "A staff caught me talking with Tracy in the Greenhouse, he got pretty upset and he bit on me won't let me go, long story." Geroge thinks even if he lies he have to base on the truth. "You're a free man now!" Ryan keeps putting jokes on him.

"Start when you ready!" Esberstark doesn't want to rush her, "I'm born ready, let get start!" Tracy is very determent on this. They walk into the room, instantly Tracy feels dripping and falling into the darkness. "Tom? where are you?" Tracy loose sight of Esberstark and scream out. she is thinking he was right there, holding her hand. everything is so dark that she can barely see her own fingers, after a while things getting a little bit lighter, she is back in that room again.

The piano is in front of her, the door is behind her, facing the window give the creeps to Tracy. She sees Tom sit there behind the piano, she walk to the piano chair and sit dow. then she hears an Esberstark voice calling her, "Tracy! I'm right here!" Esberstark calls out for her alone at the music room, he can't see her either. "Where are you? why I can't see you?" Tracy is very frightening right now. "I don't know, I think is because we can't be in the same world... but still you can hear me, that use that advantage." Esberstark can't see a thing at his view, only a music room for him. "I'm still here with you." Esberstark trying to claim her. "What can you see now?" Esberstark asks Tracy, "Ah... you just walked out because of someone calling you. then I sit by the door facing the window. at that time, I should see the REFLECTION! there is the reflection. Gives me the creeps every time." Tracy feels a breezing blow throw at her back. " Now! Tracy, stop there." Esberstark command. "what? how am I gonna do that? Tracy got no clue. "try to focus on it! it should be a clue for us, maybe he or she can tell us what happened." Tracy takes few steps back, close her eyes and take a few deep breath, then she opens her eyes, things is getting clear now, not that fussy anymore. She walk to the window and look closer at the window. "I... I think I knew him... I knew him, Tom! I know who he is!" Tracy screams out.


"Hey Ryan, did you look at the sheet music I gave you?" George starting to ask questions at Ryan. "Yeah I did! pretty good song. I think you can play it." Ryan has no idea what is going on truly. "did you show it to others?" George wants to be sure about what he and Tracy have talked about. "Yes! I show to them! all of us, so we could decide to play it or not!" Ryan spilt out. "That why That why we can see Tracy!" Ryan stops there and his face is full of questions mark. "Look at your face! you should go see a mirror now!” George take revenge on Ryan. “Hey… That not fair.” Ryan feel shameful about this. “Come on, let get out of here” George change the subject.

“Hi George. Where were you?” Mka use her moan sound to attract George after he just arrive at the stage of rehearsing. “I'm going to explain now, gather up!!!” He clap his hand twis to notice them. Then he explain where were he and what happens to him.

“So… Where is that Tracy now?” Mka ask George with a little bit envy in it. “When she is done she will come here” as he speak Tracy run in to the hall. “I know who is the reflection!!! It Renny!” Tracy scream as she run in. “Who?” George asked.


Tuesday, 23 February 2016

BrightStar part three

“Waite… Tom? Esberstark?!? Is that you?!?”
Tracy run to that men and try to hug him but her feet was like sticking on the ground and she couldn't reach to him,and she feels very compress by the air. Then everything go dark around her, after a second she fall in to theroom she died, isis so scared and try to run and reach for help but she couldn't there was no one! It was so dark and cold Tracy start on screaming Tracy help!Help!! Tracy! Tracy! Tracy open back her eyes and she saw George shouting her name and hold her arms with both hand shanking her waking her up. “You okay? You freak me out man, what happened?” George open his eyes very huge and staring at her. “It was weird, thanks for waking me up, I'm fine now.” Tracyuse her right hand to massage her arm where George hold her very hard, she is pretty sure if she didn't wake up he will strangle her to death. “George! Can you help me ask him?!?” Tracy ask George to help her. “Ah… Okay. Excuse me? Are you Tom Esberstark?” George ask nicely to the old men that crying on the floor right now for the flower he plug. “SUSH!!! Who tell you that?!? Why are you talking to the air?! Stop the drama” Esberstark walk toward to George so close that you can though their eyelashes can touch each other and grabGeorgeshirt to pull him closer. George flabbergaste that he close his eyes and almost scramble on floor and point his finger to Tracy. “My name is Sverdlovsk. Don't try to fool me boy! What are you pointing at?” Esberstark hide his identity and ask George. “She is right there! Tracy kesinger!” Esberstark let go of his hand on George shirt and stand there freeze for few seconds. “Why shall I believe in this nonsense?” Esberstark don't believe him at all. “She died! I saw her body bring out from that room! Let her be in peace! Why you have to bring her up?!”Esberstark it feeling so sad about what happened and happening now. “Come on Tracy. Help me out!” George is begging at Tracy. “I spill my hot chocolate at him when's first day of school, it was at the library. Which is no drink allow. When the library lady saw us, you hold my hand and run together. Don't know why you did such stupid thing. You were not the one who drink it. After we run down the hallways we look at each other eyes for a minute. Then we laugh together with no reason. And that how we start.” Tracy say it with a very sweet smile on her. Esberstark heart’s finally starting to beat again after Tracy dead.George have to repeat her speaking again. “What about here? You remember?” Esberstark ask Tracy. Tracy take a good look around her, “this is it right? Our dream we always talked about, a fawless greenhouse with my design of the structure for the perfect environment for the sea lavender. You did it Tom!” Tracy start to cry, tears of joy. “You also remebe the joke? Esberstark ask after listen to George. “Never forgot you always says the sun from the west is the best cause is sun down, but I always says the east is the best from sunrise. I can see you have made it for both side.” Years keep rolling down to her cheeks. Esberstark didn't say another word and just ask them to follow, George can see his eyes were full of tears. But he didn't say a word cause he is still afraid of what happen.
Tracy now know why she was feeling safe when he followed George, cause it happens at same when she ran with Tom. She start feeling wrong about this feeling… Why is it happening to both of them…

  They follow Esberstark all the way. George keep thinking why he is trap in this, he was just trying to get her star, it noon now, he said he will be right back. He look back the passage they walk on grass all the way to his school. There is no turning back now. He curage up and move on. After walk on the grass for a long time, the grass is getting taller and taller as tall as a men hight. Then for a while Esberstark put his on a tree trunk and push! The tree trunk fall oven like a huge heavy door, Esberstark show them the way to go in and he close the tree trunk. It the perfect blending with the dry leafs. There is a rock stairs. They climb walk down there and wait for Esberstark show the way. Esberstark pull out his flashlight and shone the passage, it like the a walking in a tunnel that was roughly use explosive to blow the way up and don't have any supporting on it. More they go deeper the humidity is more high, the rocks is getting so slippy. George fall on the rock three times, such painful tunnel… he take out his phone and try to turn on his flash light, but than he find out the signal don't work down here…

When they feel the presure in their ears it almost the end of the tunnel there is to much moisture inside that you can see the water drops is dripping on the rock from the side. When they arrive there is a huge black metal gate that tall approach two meters! It was such huge peace of art, Tracy touch the gate pattern and feel the stroke on it, she regonse it sea lavenders. Esberstark pull out his huge key to put in the key hole and open it, Tracy get in first, George is the last one. “What! This is disappointing… I though in here will be more master and more graceful. But… It just papers… And boxes…” George stop talking when he feels Esberstark is staring at him. He is right! Nothing special at here, just a huge cave with lot of papers and files and so on…

“Why you being is here?” Tracy ask when she look around this place and pick up a paper to look at she see her names are on it. “She is asking why you bring us here?” George help her to ask him, but actually he want to ask more than Tracy dose. “It save at here to talk about… Make me believe what you said up there!” Esberstark still don't fully trust George. Geroge have no idea how then he feel his poket got something, he grab it it Tracy sheet music! It was just return back from Ryan. He pass it to Esberstark, once he touch it and he reginise it and memory of this “this is Tracy, TRACY!!” Esberstark look up and see Tracy stand there. “You can see me?!?” Tracy is thrill. “Yes!” Esberstark run to her and hug her that he did the same hug as 20 years ago… He still love him the se way as twenty years ago. “Ah… Have you forgotten me?” George interrupted such good mode of it. “Who is he?” Esberstark ask Tracy. “Ah… He is a guitar player at a bang and try to recrue me. Than… It a long story.” Tracy got irritated once she talk about George. They hold on to each other more for awhile “why you never came back Tom?” Tracy ask Esberstark what happened back then. “I can fully explained that.”

“At the time when I was called out, the death if yours already start. When I arrive the labtory, there was no one, just some… Lab stuff that I don't understand. Then I turn back try as fast as possible to come back to you Tracy, I did try hard. But than Lyon Racer show up, he said “well well! Look what we got here? It Tracy lover baby Tom!” I try to run pass him but he swing his baseball bat to swing at my right leg. I fell on the floor, I tried to get up but he hit me at the back again. I'm sorry Tracy I couldn't get there in time. They drag me to the hall and force me into the storage room torture me in there try to get where you are. They even… Even… I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave it up, I though I can get there in time. But they knock me out. When I wake up the party beggin, it was their music that wake me up. I run outside the door was locked I scream for help. Finally there is few not yet drunk kid help me unlock the door. I ran to your room right away, my leg was in very bad shape. I ran at fast as I could. When I arrive there is fire coming out from your room, firefighters sucre the area and block me going in. I tell them you are inside, few of them go in and found you, when they come out… You already burn to death. I couldn't stand the pain and my legs pain at the same time. I faint. When I wake up at hospital it already two days after. I tell everything I know, so they investigate those assholes. They didn't live for long for somereason. Lyon lead the way, he died when the investagtion. The cops were asking him question, he panic when he heard you were dead. He knew it was bad for him. So he was going to tell the whole thing, but he died right away when he talks. It was poision but no trace. After his death, others freak out and went to hide, Michael dead after four months from smoking meth. Later on Kerry couldn't take the pressure so he committed suicide. After that the others disappear. No one finds them no baby no trace. So there is no hope of finding your killer. After graduation I becan a detective, but not for long. I was caught to steeling your files, they suspended me but never found the files, they don't care anyway. They are what you are staring right now boy!” Esberstark looking at George walking aroung like a five years old kid went to the Museum. “So I become a cleaner at your school, to hope I can keep investigate what happened, that how I build the green house” Esberstark end his story and looking at Tracy. Tracy take the turn to tell her story to him and they beggin to match up what happened on that day to be exact.

To be continue ...

Friday, 19 February 2016

Bright star part two

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 "What do you mean by you are deceased?" George is still so confusing about what Tracy said. He keep trying to put the pieces together. "You all not suppose to see me, I've tried for years, no one sees me, even before I'm died! " Tracy can not hold on to herself, she has been depressing for almost 20 years. "Alright. Slow down! I can see you are upset, I think you really gonna need my help. Let go somewhere private" George knows she need some where more isolate so he could listen to her better. "Guys! Keep on what you are doing. I'll be back, Ryan help me out!" George grab her hand softly so he won't hurt her, Tracy follow his step did not knowing where he is going, bit she felt safe when she walk with him. 
They have arrive to a place at the roof top. Tracy is not familiar around here, but this place is so pretty, there is a glass green house such greatness design up here, there are mostly Tracy favourite
 flowers sea lavender and all kind of Tracy loved one. They go inside to the green house, the windy sound is gone, the sun shine is different "what is this place? Where is everyone?" Tracy ask George when she take a look around inside of this green house and touch the flowers. There is yellow, pink purple, all different kind of growing ways. "Not much people come up here, only the workers who take care of this flowers comes here." George seems so clam in this place.

 "You can say it here now. "Alright. You have to go back like 20 years, my name is Tracy Kesinger, born at 6th of September 1972, I died at 25th of January 1996. That day was the date of graduation party, I was going to be singer on stage, meant to be the new star. I was so nerves, that why my boyfriend Tom Esberstark help me to practice, he didn't really know how to play music, but he is a such great listener. I was singing to him, then someone knock on the door and ask him to come out, he said he'll be back soon, but he never did. Later I heard he was in the party already." Tracy eyes start wobbling tears, George try to focuse on what she is saying but he just couldn't get his eyes out of her stunning eyes she got there. She use her Sleeves swap of the tears on her eyelashes, she take a deep breath and keep on to her tragedy. 

"There was I.  Forgotten. Alone. Cold. Waiting for whom that never will come back. It was so quiet, everything seems not alive anymore, I seat at the floor behind the door. The tree shadow shown on the floor at the music room, it looks there there is a monster with claws trying to grab my legs, that scares me so much so I scrum together more and I stop look at the shadow I looked at the moon, it was so bright! Such huge and full of hope, so I make a wish to the moon beg Esberstark  will come back When I open my eyes I saw something at the window reflection, I've got one second to focuse on that reflection, I can roughly see it a reflection of a face looking at me. I startled and turn my head right away but there is no one. I start to feel something is wrong so I grab my sheet music and my lyrics plan on stop waiting and go to my show on my own. Then the haters came," "Who?" George interrupts her speaking. "The haters!" Tracy got irritated. "So... Do they bully you or something?" George wanna understand more. "Not really, but they try their best to make me a hard time and keep forcing Esberstark stop dating with me. But Esberstark didn't give up, I guess he just love me but can't held till the end. I guess he got bored of me... That why he left." Tracy starting to think to much in her head. "Hey hey! But make yourself like this, keep on! What next?" George try to get her spirit back up. "I walked to the door then I heard Lyon Racer calling so creapy" Tracy?... Where are you? Aren't you going to be the STAR! That sing on the stage?! Well you know, I've bump in to Esberstark in the party all alone. So... I wonder. Where is his girlfriend? So of course I went to ask him, then he said you HERE! IN THIS ROOM!" Oh my god! Then he bang on the door so hard that make such loud banging, I...I star... Startle and fell on the floor." It is so painful for Tracy to bring this back up. "Do you need a break?"  George ask very soft hope that can help Tracy calm down. "No, I want to tell. So he keep on going. "Why don't you come out now and have some FUN with us?" "No! I'm not coming out for you, go away!" I tried to fight them away. "Alright then! You choice! You never be out again." After Lyon said that I can hear he is putting a key inside of that key hole slowly on purpose so I can hear it. I ran to the door try to stop this happing. Then he twis his key so fast so it locked before I tried to twis the handle. The locking sound of that room is still feels like it surounding me right now. I... I kept trying to twis the handle but it stiff locked... I couldn't ... . Tracy is breathing to fast and consuming by the fear of her memory. George quickly grab a flower and plug it to let Tracy smell it aroma, he pick the right choice. It her favorite flower, it sea lavender. She clam herself down and keep speaking. "They keep laughing at me outside the door, and say I did this to myself, I'm the one who said I'm not coming out. I kept screaming for help and I beg them to... But they never did. They just kept laughing. "How many people were there? What their names?" George asking for more information. "There are five people, Lyon Racer, Gary Wolf, Michael Dance, Ka Hell, ken Traylon." Tracy answer his question very patiently. She have know idea why she keep telling him this, but she felt great by doing this. She is guessing because this has been depressing for very long time. "So what happens next?" "They kept laughing and show me the music room key at the door window "I really need to say thanks for you beloved friend who own this things, I guess he don't need this anymore" I can see Finch names was on the key tag, then I'm so afraid of what did they do to Finch." "Hold on, who is Finch?" George have no clue who is he. "He is a staff that clean our school, he is a old poor man. When you say hello to him the time you get in your classroom is the time he can finally done turning his head to look back. Funny right? So I'm pretty sure it easy to take those key from him. Then I watch them walked away and laugh at me. I kept screwing for help, I saw my watch it 7:36pm party start already. I should have been readying for on stage, why no one notice and look for me? Where was Esberstark? I kept waiting but he never came. I stared to get tired and slide on the door and seat on the floor. Looking at the window, THERE! The reflection on the window show that face again! The face I saw before Lyon come. I turn my head right away and there is no one again. I did not care I scream for hep, but there was no one. After around 5 minutes, there are some gases come in from the air way, I've no idea what going on. I stop trying to call for help cause I know there will be no one. The gases smells horrible when I breath in it burn my throat and I kept caughting. Soon I couldn't breath in and out, I knew there is the end, I grab on to the last things I can hold and that the sheet music you stole from me. And I Iie down there, buring in my chest, full mouth of my own blood... Here I am! Trap! No in or out in this school!" Tracy finish her tragedy. "Wow! Such sad story... But not really persuasive. It hard to believe this could happens to you. But I just google search... It says in this school twenty years ago was a small fire only, never mention there is a body or gas leak?" George show her the searching result. "I don't know there is an fire..."Tracy are very confuse. 
"WHAT ON EARTH are you doing here all alone in my green house?!?" There is a men around 40-50 years old come in to the green house. "I... I'm not alone." George answer. "You think I'm a fool?!? There is only you, and GOD BLESS! What on earth have you done to my sea lavender?!?" That men looking at the sea lavender George pick for Tracy on the floor. "Why he can't see he?" Tracy whisper behind George. "I don't know." George is so scared right now and froze there. "Waite... Tom? Esberstark?!? Is that you?!?"

Monday, 15 February 2016


Bright star 

    There is an Awsome guy name George, he is very good at his instrument, especially his guitar, he start play it since 3 years old, not force to, he was born to be with misic, and he just love the freedom of floating in music.
  Tracy walking around the collage looking for her room and put down her belongings. “Ouch!”
Tracy,stop talking when he look up and saw that pairs of sapphire blue eyes infrount of her “I .. A..yeh , ah it okay ,I can take that bump” George say it very sloppy cause he is also stuns by the hazel green eyes she have there “do you need a hand for your stuff ?”Geoge ask very nicely. “I think I can take it myself, thank you” Tracy walked away left to find her room.

  After the settlement and a night if rest ,it open day !!! She follow all others and go to the hugest Hall she ever been in her life and sit down with others ,the show beggin , there was a bang presenting at the stage ,the show were Awsome, Tracy felt in love with the music going on stage, she never knew the a group of student would capable of playing music such great than she reginise the guitar guy, it was the guy she bump in yesterday, she imidintly feel so embarrassing about it, but than the girls team show up, their dance steps are amazing and there she is! The perfect girl that stands out at the middle. Tracy just feel so great that she do not want to leave this place for first time in her life.

  She stays until everyone is gone, the instrument were left on stage, she slowly walk on stage and look around, she look and she can feel it, she can feel the power of music still reacting to each other, she can smell the the sweat the nervous the rusty guitar and the wood instrument on stage, she look at the audience the light shine on her directly so she could not see under the stage but she can still feel the eyes looking at her (she is imaging ) she turn back and walk forward to the instrument, and though the piano, the moment she put her hand on the piano pad she feel a struck to her hand she was shock and let go of it, she walk few steps back and accidentally kick a guitar, lucky she act fast and grap it in time so it would not fall, she hold on the guitar, it a classical guitar with heavy wood for the body, she put her fingers on the strings and swing over it, she feel so great so she keep swinging it randomly than she start singing with her wonderful voice “Say something I'm giving …” “You should ask before you touch others stuff” Suddenly come from nowhere a voice speak to Tracy, she startle and try to look for the voice, but then she reginise the voice !it the guitar player! “I know you, you are the one who play this guitar” Tracy speak to the voice direction ,”indeed ,not yet introduce, I'm Geoge, where you from, I never saw you before ”said Geoge with courious. “I'm Tracy, I'm sorry I shouldn't been here, I'll be gone” said Tracy with frighten voice she walked away and go back to her room. “You scared her off, mate, you should use better tone to girls not just your music” said Ryan in a great mode, walk in after Tracy run away “Maybe you should treat girls harder like you treat the drums!” Geoge jokes “I'm not gonna beat them like drums, I'm a gentlemen ,gentle men ,I treat them softly, hungry?” Ryan laugh at Geoge“come on, stop it. Let get something to eat, you are buying for making fun of me” Geoge put his hand on his BestFreind shoulder and walk with him “I was just joking, but you really need to change your tone. ”Ryan said it with smile. 


 The next morning cause her last night she just change her cloths and just put on her sleeping coat and went to sleep,Tracy just woke up with foggy eyes, she get up and take her morning stuff and ready to get to wash room to clean up ,she open her room door and BAM! Someone stand at her door when she walked out she bump on him and bouns back “Ouch Jesus who... ?”Tracy look up and see Geoge standing there look like tried to knock on her door, he look at her and see her undress well so he immediately turn his head away , “You? How did you know I'm here?” Tracy ask counfusely. “I ..I was trying to look for you!”Geoge panicked and put both of his hands up. “What do you want?” Tracy ask with a gate between them. “Can you come by to the hall ?”Geoge ask. “What for ?” Tracy asked. “You will know!” Geoge said it and walk away. Tracy left their with confusing and think for a whole day and decide to give a shot. 


Tracy walk in to the hall with fear, she stand middle of the hall and turn 360’ spread her arms to feel the atmosphere in there, the moment when she start to fall in it“ HEY ! I see you come !”said Geoge by shouting. Tracy freak out down down her arms and put it around her chest, “ ah ..yes I came, what do you want now ?” Tracy asked. “Sing! Go! Stage! Go on!” Said Geoge. Tracy didn't even bother to aske him again and walk in stage, looking at the only audience stare at her with out blinking or any emotion, “Go on! Sing !” 

She behing with cracking voice cause she is so scared cause Geoge staring at her “Hey hey hey ! What wrong with you ?that not what I hear last time” Geoge shout to her. “I can not sing when you stare at me like I punch your face before!” Tracy shout back to him. Geoge turn around “can you sing now?!” Tracy start relief right after Geoge turn around, she start singing right away, it was beauty in heaven. After her singing Geoge forgot his staring and just fall in her voice , he need a minutes to realise she stopes singing “oh ah … You have a great voice! Really you do , but ah… You need to train more in order to make your lungs stronger and follow up the beat, you know what I mean?” Geoge said it when he is still dreaming in her voice “come around when you have time, I'll help you,okay?” Geoge said to her and walk away left Tracy stand there alone do not know what to do and pissed by not knowing   But secretly she is sooo glad that he said he love her voice.


“Did you see her ?” Geoge ask Ryan at the next day at practice room. “Who?”asked Ryan. “ you remember the girl I talked to after the open day ?” Geoge trying to make him remeber. “I did not really saw her, I was assuming you talking to a girl cause I know you” said Ryan. “ you wanna say what going on ?” Ask Ryan with suspension eyes trying to get information from Geoge. “ nothing I just though she would come.” “Oh…! Poor Geoge is in love !!!” Said Ryan with sneaky smile on his  face. “Shut up !” 

At night Geoge went to Tracy room and try to knock on her door. Knock…knock… “Who is it ?”said the girl in the room , Geoge reginise not Tracy voice, that girl open her door “What ?” “Um … I'm looking for Tracy.” Asked Geoge. “Who ?” “ Tracy! I guess she is your roommate or something ,I saw her yesterday at here!” “No… Never heard of her, I think you got the wrong room.” “ but she was right…” Geoge stop talking cause he saw at the end of the hallway Tracy standing there looking at him , he identified her and start walking to her, Tracy turn around and start run away, Geoge saw that and run along try to call out her name. He keep running but then she vanish! He lost her and he could not find her, he have to give up and walk away. 
  He turn around ready to walk away than “Holy …! What?! Where ?! You scared the crab out of me!” Geoge startle cause Tracy was just standing at his back looking at him. “Why you here ?” Tracy said. “How did you do that ? You ghost or something?” Geoge still a bit shock after she show up. Tracy face motion change and said “even I tell you you would not understand…” She whisper. “Why you are in that room yesterday? That girl said she never heard of you, who are you?” Geoge finally comeback together and ask “She was parting whole night, I borrowed her room, she do not know a thing cause she was drunk and sleeping at the others boys arm.” Tracy said it very clearly so it easy for Geoge to understand. “Why? You do not have your own room?” “Yes I do. Just do not like it.” “Why you did not come to our practice ?” Geoge ask to try to find out why. “Why I have to come?” Tracy ask him back. “Cause I like your singing ,and i think I can make you a star!” Geoge said it fill with excitement. “No ,I do not want to, people do not see me.” “They wil when you become a star!” Geoge walk forward and grab her shoulders. “What makes you think that?” She started to feel annoy about all this. “Cause I just knows, please!” Tracy did not answer and use her hand slide over to smack away Geoge hands on her shoulder then just walk right pass him. When Geoge turn around she was already gone.


  Geoge could not get her out of his head, he keep think about her and her singing still stay in his head, but he has no idea how to find her, when he start to get to frustrating, some one walk in to the classroom, he looked back and saw her, there she is! Tracy! Right there. He keeps hoping tine can go faster.

The end of the class, he ran to her and try to follow her so he could talk to her, “Tracy please! I want you, I need a singer!”Geoge keep trying to follow up, but it was so crowed in the hallway, he could not see her then she is gone when everyone back into the classroom.


Geoge decide to leave her alone so maybe she will come around, he go back to the leeson he should be, “stop stalking me!” Geoge freak out and turn back , Tracy were sitting there stare at him and crossing her hands front of her chest, “What… How… When did you? Can you please be my singer ?” Geoge asked by a supprising tone, since he is so desperate Tracy finally said yes to him.

   “Why you want me to be your singer?” Tracy ask Geoge when he is preparing for thier first practice. “Cause when I hear your voice, I know. I know you will be the one who sing by me and be my star!” Geoge say it with out thinking and determine. “I've been here for years there no way people could see me!” Tracy slip out. “What do you mean ? You are here for years? No one can see you? If you were studying here I would have saw you. You must be new student, right?”Geoge feel like a breezing run though his back. “You going continue or not? I still do not know why you can see me after all.” Tracy is getting cross. Geoge try to open his mouth and ask again “Don't ! Even think about it!” Tracy scroll at him try to make him stop talking. “Fine...but”Geoge is stubben. “Just STOP! Will you ?” Tracy got irritate by Geoge foolish. “Okay… Let get on with it. No one talk to me like that way.You know? ” “Well… I'm no one”Tracy said it with pride. “You really trying you best to mess with my head, are you? No one … I really don't understand.”“ I hope you never understand.”Drop of tear flash of light reflect at her eye coner for a second. Geoge though he see it but he do not know what he just saw, he shake his head go back on his business. 
  He start play on his guitar and ask Tracy to join in anytime she feel like it, Geoge play on and keep the music gentle nice and smooth on his way. Tracy starts to calm and relax, staring to enjoy the atmossphere. She begin her way to sing and it was beautiful. Geoge even almost stop playing, but than he realise this is just making him play on more music and inspiration, than he knew this girl is going to be her bright star.
  Days past on, Tracy singing skill is getting more skilled, Geoge decide to introduce her to his mate and The Queen. “Hey, do you think is time for you to meet our team?” Geoge ask her very soft. “What?! Why shall I?!” Tracy just make the air very incense. “Well...I thought” Geoge feel agonise about this. “Stop thought ing! Stop thinking your own way! How many times I've to tell you people can not see me?!?” Tracy do not have her temper contral anymore, “You did said that, but you never explain why, each time I ask you just shut silence or turn around, be clear now. And I never think for my own! I'm helping you” Geoge is coming out from his skin, he is getting very piss now, “Help me… Help ME ?! Is that what you think for the whole time? I do not need help, you are the one who need help, you are the one who beg me to help you, I do not need any babysitter, even I tell you you would not understand a thing I'm telling you!” Tracy ran away, she forgot her lyrics book behind cause she was to angry to remember, it was her own writing lyrics book never shown to anyone. Geoge comedown for a moment and walk to her stuff and pick it up, it was a simple old sheet music, very old oddly old, Geoge try to call out for Tracy, but she was gone already. Geoge though it was nothing than commit oneself to keep for her just for now. 

 The next day Tracy approach secretly at the rehears of the Christmas show. She stand behind the hall gate watch from there, she hear the music start turn on than there he is, Geoge playing the guitar, testing the music. 

Then she saw there is a girl she can not put away her eyes, Tracy do not know her name, but she is surround by other pretty girls, but this Queen is most stand out one, others were only just stand behind her, they start on rehearsing the dance, Queen was very beautiful, Tracy can not get away from looking at her, “Hey! Who are you? What are you looking at?!” A voice come from Tracy back, Tracy was shocked and didn't expect this would happens. “I…I was looking for Geoge.” He did not care and just grab her jacket hat and drag her into the hall and ask “Hey! Geoge! She said she knows you,”He wave his hand so he could jiggle her around, “Yeah! She is my star! Stop doing that Ryan, I thought you treat girls very nice?” Geoge said “Oh! Sorry about that! Did not know you know her, I thought Feakin Team was try to send a spy to copy out songs again.” Ryan felt making a monkey out of himself. “Come on Tracy! Did not know you were coming come meet out team!” Geoge is so happy that he can finally have Tracy in his team, “Let me introduce! I'm the team leader! The guitar guy and the main singer, the one who drag you in is Ryan! Play drums and my BestFriend!” Tracy take a good time to look at Ryan, he seems like a nice guy. Not to bad on looking, has a memorable ginger hair, guessing he is from England according from his accent and his hair, his dressing style is very random can not tell he is a drummer, looks like he is just a kid who play on street putting something comfortable on himself, he would not look straight in to Tracy eyes cause he still feeling sorry about what just happens and just wave his hand and say hi, “And he is my base guitar guy Crew, he is very good at his guitar but not good at talking and do not need to mention about his singing,” Tracy look at him and nothing caught her eyes but his hands is full of bandage so she knows that he is very new to guitar, but he did not talk so she could not  guess where he came from. “Move on the my Miss Piano Sherry, she ah… Can play piano?” Sherry say hi to Tracy and Tracy said back hi to her, nothing pops up from her just a cool girl who dress so cool and play piano gracefully, “next is our main dancer team, basically is our team life support. Ifwe doing this without them, our team would lose so much vote for the out school compotition, girls introduce yourself!”said Geoge with excitement. “ I'm Mka, it means the queen, here are my girls.” Tracy couldn't look away from her, now she understand the meaning of The queen. She have the perfect curly blond hair, perfect skin tone that can match any cloths, and the way she dress it precise, nothing can do more, Tracy is envy at her. “Hello new star, I'm Hellen the girl who dance just next to Mka, nice to meet you hope we can dance together, you have a nice body shape.” Tracy notice this girl did not have any make up on her she looks very natural, but Tracy saw inside her highhills is hiding so many tape on her ankle, Tracy knows she is having a hard time to follow up with Mka. “ hi I'm Snowy, dump my real name long time ago, nice to meet you.” Snowy is dramatic opposite of Hellen, silver hair, heavy makeup and lot of asseserise on her hair band, neck less, rings, bracelet… She is very comfortable dance with highhills, all famous brand on her. “Me, me next! I'm Julian! Dance at the back! But I'm mostly the one who plan our steps.” Not hard for Tracy to tell she is very self narcissism, messy curl hair and too much perfume. “ I'm Vichy, dance at the middle and the one who find our dance music pattern, so on … Walen … Pinkie … Grinch. 

  “Okay … Done with our ‘nice to meet you’ thing” go back in what you were doing!” Tracy walk to Geoge and wanna to talk to him at private.
“How is this happing?” Tracy ask Geoge. “What you mean? Cause you were sneaking up at us?” Geoge keep teasing her. “Why? You asking me why? Why you still do not get it?!? You all are not suppose to see me! I'm deceased!” Tracy can't stand Geoge stupidity. 

Part one ends.