Friday, 11 March 2016

BrightStar chapter seven, eight

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Chapter seven

Last chapter:
“So… Where is that Tracy now?” Mka ask George with a little bit envy in it. “When she is done she will come here” as he speak Tracy run in to the hall. “I know who is the reflection!!! It Renny!” Tracy scream as she run in. “Who?” George asked.

“It Renny! He studies science, mostly spend time in labtory.” Tracy say more after she arrive and stop running. “The nerd!” Esberstark help George clear his question mark on his face. “He was a science student, always stay in the labtory do experiment and cauclatetion. Tracy always has been nice on him, he was isolate by others because of his intelligence.” Esberstark explain everything. “But there is no way he could killed me, he is such a great person.” Tracy clear for Renny. “Only one way to find out!” George suggest. “Let go find him! He should be like… 40 something like you?” George ask Esberstark. “Do you know his address?” Tracy look in to Esberstark and ask him. “You have ask the right person. Wait here, I'll go get it. I'll be back.” Esberstark jog away and left them here. “So… Gather up!” Don't waste anytime! Practice makes perfect!” George keep being a leader. “You still in a mood to play music even after all this?” Tracy ask George. “Why not? We are falling way behind!” George really wants this show to be perfect. “Do you have any idea how importants this show is? It HUGE! It gonna let our principle to decide our team go or the frankins go to the championship of or state! Which is why I need to recruit a singer! A bright star! You!” George explain to Tracy why he need her so much. “Mka can sing for you!” Tracy try to pass the ball. “She..ah...she can't sing, they all sing horrible.” George feel embarrass when talking about the girls. “They only have the look and dance, please! Sing with me!” George beg her. “How is anyone going to see me, I'm dead remember?” “You sheet music! Once we touch we can see you, same as the audience!” “How you gonna make everyone to touch it?” “ I've few ideas, I can pull this off” George end the conversation. “I'm back!!!” Esberstark run back into the hall from the cave he made. “I've got the address here, I never suspect him, after all he is just a lab guy. We can go take a visit.” Esberstark suggest a quick way. “I'll go with you!” George don't want to loose any chance to help Tracy to find out what happens. “Stay with me!” Mka grab George’s hand and try to make him stay. But George just push her hand off and says he will be back soon and walk with Esberstark. Mka standing there start feeling little jealous of Tracy now.

Chapter eight

So, Esberstark and George arrive at Renny apartment that Esberstark was hold. It was a truditional house that have three floors anda triangle roof top with a grace iron gate auroing the huge garden.Look from outside you can see the whole building is build from braicks which looks brownies the garden seems well care be there is no any other plants except for grass that trim to perfect land like what you see in golf. “But George notice at the side if the house the little coner grow a small little flower there, George recognise it the flower that Tracy like! The sea leavender! “ exactly you going to ask the questions?” George have no idea how to do this anymore. “Like this! Watch me!” Esberstark lead his way and  ring the bell, after a minutes a old lady comes to answer the door, “yes? Who is this?” The old lady use her old age sound to ask. “Good afternoon lady, I'm detective Esberstark and this is my partner George, we have come a long way to look for Renny and ask about the incident twenty years ago. Do you mind we talk to your son? Esberstark says it like he was actually a detective. (To remind, Tracy stays in school because she have no way to get outside of the school) George is so nervous about this pretending, so he stay quite and follow Esberstark lead. “My son is gone!” A old man come behind the old lady says it. “I'm so sorry about this, would you like to come in first?” The old lady apologise for her husband rudeness. “Yes, please!” Esberstark feel greatful.

George follow Esberstark and he start to look around the house, it just perfect! What I mean is everything is putting where exact it belong! The carpet on floor you can see it has some age but it still clean and warm colours, plate that is rare and expensive collection is put inside the cupboard clean and in order. As they walk inside the old lady talk to them. “I'm Renny’s mom, you can call me Mrs Dalton, he is Renny’s father. This is our house. As you see I'm a 64 years old lady. I hope you can understand.” Renny's mom explain to George who she is.

  They have arrive the resting room of the house and Esberstark sit down where Mrs Dalton lead them. “My son Renny disappear after Tracy incident. I've no idea where is he now.” Mrs Dalton tell the answer before Esberstark even ask, “he was gone after two years of Tracy dead to be excect. Tracy was such a nice girl, she walk home with Renny few times for his project, they can make such a great art. She has been his only friend, hey are good friends and there is no reason my boy will hurt her, don't even mention about killing her.” Mrs Dalton eyes start silence cry with rolling tears. George feels sorrow about this scene, same as Esberstark, but still he have to keep on asking before Mrs Dalton change her mind to answer anymore qeustions. “Did Renny say any things or acting weirded before and after the incident?” Esberstark acting is such a profession. He can see Mrs Dalton eyes is dropping tears, but she stop sniffing and her eyes motion for a second. Then he knows she is bidding something. “He was all up high at that time in his brain.” Mr Dalton spilt it out. Mrs Dalton close her eyes shut and few drop of tears fall out to her cheeks, “oh please! Stop, he was such a good boy, he did nothing wrong.” She whisper. She is still blind with the love to her son. “Help yeah! He was such a good boy that put those needles in his godame veins. The definition now days are way different.” Mr Dalton is getting so angry now. “What make you say that? Was he not souber?” George ask. “Hell yea! He couldn't even tell me did he eating his dinner, spending all his money to buy those shit, I spend all my life on him and that what I got for return.” Mr Dalton say nothing good to Renny, but for the real reason that he is so angry is because he love his son so much that he don't believe the drugs is going to take his son away just by that easy. He use anger to replace forgiveness to fill the hole in his heart. He need the fresh air so he walk upstiars.  Left Mrs Dalton all alonesitting at the sofa. “There is no report saying your son take any medication , why is that?” Esberstark check the files agin and there were no mention about Renny drug addicts problems. “No one ever notice Renny, everyone just see the surface of the incident, they were all looking at Lyon and other Bulliers. I wish they have ask so they could help my son before I notice it was to late.” Mrs Dalton regret so much about she couldn't help her son sooner.
 “Do you know what drug he was taking?” George asks. “No… Even if I don't know what drug he was taking, If I know that he was even touching it, I would have stop him. He never talks about anything that bothers him or making him stress. But I knew he was having trouble with making friends, which is why I'm happy that Tracy was his friend!” Mrs Dalton feel abit comfort after memorizing of the memory of Renny. “Do you mind we go take a look of your sons room?” Esberstark ask nicely. “Yea sure! The second door to the left at second floor. I didn't change his placement, things stays the same as he was gone, I clean up the dust some times.” Mrs Dalton show the way. “Why no change?” George have just ask such an rude question. Mrs Dalton stand there froze. “Do you mind make us a drink?” Esberstark help him get out of this tragic moment, “yea...sure… I have lemon ice…, I'll go get some.” Mrs Dalton walk to the kitchen. “You fool! Are you out of your mind?! Why on earth did you ask that question?” Esberstark teaching George a lesson. “What? Why not?” George still don't understand. “Parents never give up! They never stop loving their child, most case missing child, the parents keep everything In place so when thier beloved child come home they can come back to thier home again. Even some case they got bad news, they will still keep it, so if you ask this kind of stupid questions again. Not just make them a hard time, also pointing there is no hope. Get it?” George nod to show he understand.

They walk upstairs and George look around to satisfied his curious. Wood floor steps on for the stairs cover with the finest carpet to warm up the cold tone in house, lighten up they way with rice white wall paper with hidden rose printing with slightly darker colour. Last decorating with simple frame on the wall, but the picture weren't simple! They are Mr Dalton and Mrs Dalton loving travel posture around the world, there were few pictures with Renny inside, but all without Mr Dalton.

George finish the sniffing and walk in with Esberstark to Renny's room. They were not surprise. All science stuff in the room, blackboard for the wall to cauclate the physic, formula for the chemical, a wood board for sticking picture for the research of the creatures. Poster around the room of different scientists. Lot of science project around the lab table, I'm serious, there is a lab table in his room. It a vast, huge variety room, image a room can put a adult bed, a huge bookcase, a lab table, and a huge desk for study. And planty of place for science and art project put on floor. Done thinking? Yea excectly, must be expensive. “She is right! He is a good boy.” Mr Dalton looking at a picture sitting at Renny bed and said. Mr Dalton standup and put the picture where it was placed, George can slightly see it a picture of Mr Dalton and Renny stanging front of the school gate. Guess it the first day of school.

Esberstark walk to the studying desk and notice it was strange, all books in room is placed at the bookcase, but only this science book put here on desk very neat, no papers for note, no pen using, so he take a closer look, he sees a lot of memo at the science book, he have no interested for studying it, but he row down and read there is a word pops up, each memo is writing with black or blue pen, but he saw there is a mark with green written ‘Letter’, Esberstark open that page, yes no trick, there is an letter, Esberstark pick it up and show to Mr Dalton. “It Renny writing! How could have I missed it for all this long?” Mr Dalton recognise it Renny writing and stuns by what he have missed for twenty years. “Oh my! God have mersy, what is the letter about?” Mrs Dalton come up with four cups of lemon ice on a silver tray, she almost faint when she heard this news, George react fast and help her hold the tray and Mr Dalton give his shoulder to her.

“Let see what is this about” Esberstark start reading the letter.


Friday, 4 March 2016

Brightstar part four, five and six

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  The story has come to Tracy and Esberstark finally meet each other. Their conversation continue...

  "Why I haven't see you around in school?" Tracy ask Esberstark to find out more, "I have no idea, it fate I guess." Esberstark puzzle in his own brain. "How see your world look like?" "It was not clear, it wa blur can't focus. I can't remember what happens, I don't have my memorise, don't know who I am can't reginise anyone, I try to call out but I can't! The way I died is causing my respiratory system so weak, I don't feel hungry but I felt my sheet music was the only things that importants to me. I hold on to it, and each time I'm lost, there will be a strong feeling from my sheet music and tell me where to go. After giving times. I can breath, speak, even sing. Then I can start hearing things, people talk, laugh, cry, calling out. It all surounding me. Took me long time to learn how to not hearing them. After this wonderful time, the nightmare begin. I was swollen back to where I was traped. Back in that room. Dark. Cold. Alone. It like I still have a purpose in there. So I calm myself and search aroung in that room." "Wait! Do you know how long is that after you die?" George interrupting her again. "I don't know, I told you it was fussy. I guess it already five years later. Cause everyone dress different already. No the same way we dress," Tracy look into Esberstark eyes. "So I traped in that room again, I saw you walked out of that room, I stayed and wait for you, everything is happing all over again, when I get scared it get fussy again, the more not clear they are, the more I got scared. I do not think I can contral it, I know cause I've tried dos many times already, I guess my emotion will stay the same as I died." Esberstark hold Tracy toward to his chest and hug her very hard. "Don't be. I here now..." Esberstark clam Tracy down and try to protect her from hurting again. "Ah..." George try to speak. "Did I tell you to shut your mouth?!?" Esberstark got impatient for George rudeness. "No! I have an idea, Tracy, do you think you can go back and see what heppened?" George ask her for his smart ass "Yeah! I think so, but I've put lot of times to get out of there."  Tracy feel forceful about this. "How did you manage to get out of there?" Esberstark worried for her so he ask him to be sure. "I wait! I what till the thing pass on as the way they happened. Thing in there get more clear each time I got out of that room, so each time things get more clear for me to understand. I got carry out by the fire man. I able to get of that bed anytime when after get out of that room, but I never able to get out if this school, when they leave the school the bed I lie on will disappear and I fall on the floor. It like there is a huge forcefield blocking me out. " Tracy tell Esberstark what happened and going to happens. "Honestly I think gerige plans will work. But is it gonna be too much for you?" Esberstark is worrie for Tracy. "If it works, I want to do it, if it can really help me get out of this place. Yes!" Tracy said it with pleasure. "How did you came to my show at open day?" George want to understand more, "I saw and gear lot if people taking about the open day, and they also mention about you and your bang. Labels everywhere saying you gonna be the show main show. So I wonder since my word is getting more clear why not go see something new, so on that day, I follows the peoples,  walked in that hall. That how we meet!" Geroge feel it such a amazing journey she got there. "Alright then. Shall we beggin?" Esberstark suggested.

bs chapter6

  Geroge leads the way climbing out of the cave, Esberstark close the gate and begin to climb the way out, “Tract follow me, Geroge stay the last! no way I'm gonna let you fall and get us all killed” Esberstark say this to George for humiliate him in front of Tracy. Geroge has no chance to fight back so he climbs up in silence.

Since going down is already hard, no way climbing up will be easy. Although it hard for them, Esberstark has climbed this rock tunnels for 20 years. Sure he is capable of this easy level.

Half way at the tunnel now, such dark and wet in there, George have no choice but to put his creapy phone flashlight away and use full hand to climb, but once he put it away he regret it. It is so dark that he can only see the light from Esberstark flashlight such far away. “Ah!!!” Tracy calls out. She trip and slip her legs, luckily George reacts fast enough so he can spear an empty hand to support her, there is the awkward moment… His hand is putting at a wrong place at Tracy … Tracy secure herself “thanks, I guess” Tracy try to climb  to as fast as she could so she could get out of this awkward moment. “sorry I didn't mean to I was just trying to help.” George trying to explain to Tracy, but Tracy ignore him and keep climbing. She didn't scroll at him because her ex-boyfriend is up there, and for all of their sake, she don't want them to be dangerous just because she get angry. But all in George head his just thinking she's kind of real for a ghost.

finally, they have arrived at their tunnel exit. Esberstark pushes that tree trunk and gets his feet back on land.Esberstark pull out his hand and help Tracy goes up and walk away go on a reach to the school. “hey... anyone help me out?” George still traps in the tunnel alone. Why am I even here? I'm just playing the guitar… He thinks for awhile and he climbs up to the whole himself. He closed off the tree trunk and follow up, he was falling way behind.

 As they are running to the room that Tracy died. George speed up and speak to Tracy and whisper “hey! Are you ready for this?” George is worrying for Tracy. “what do you mean? We are on our way now! I can't back out right now.”Tracy don't want to say no for now, either she wants to she already said yes at the cave and there's no turning back now. “I mean. If it's me normal for anyone to accept this much in such a short while.” George just trying to cut her some slack. “Well, I'm not someone and is not too much I've waited for 20 years. And Esberstark was my boyfriend he is just older doesn't mean he's not the same person. I don't want to hurt his feeling.” Tracy tries to put all this in a normal view, “is that what you mean? After 20 years you still love him?” Geroge got envy about this, “No!”Tracy shout out than she turn her voice down and whisper “I didn't mean by that, it just, he Was my boyfriend, it been twenty years, I don't expect this to happens, it just!” Tracy can not explain her feeling to Esberstark. “You still love him, but just not like the way you use to be?” George helps her to express. “Yes… Just not like I use to be…” Tracy feel is guilty about this so she look away from George's eyes and look down. “anything wrong you can talk to me, you know that right?” George holds her hand and face to her but she shake his hand off from her hand and say “I don't need to, and why Tom can see me after you pass him that sheet music?”Tracy starting to get irritated that she scream so angry but secretly she got a happy feeling of George warn hand and her heart starts beating again. She has not Idea why this is happening. “I don't know... how can I know?!” George not sure himself also. “Why Ryan and the others can see me? did you show them aswell?” Tracy asked George for a quick answer, “ Oh shot! I gave it to Ryan so he could take a good look, then he said he wants to study it.” George has no idea what he have done. “How much you want to bet he shown to others?” Tracy finally clears her clouds now. “We have to go seek out! We should go ask Ryan!” George panic. “I think you go alone and ask will be enough.” Esberstark comes us from nowhere, Tracy and George got flabbergasted. “When did you got here? When you start to listen?” Tracy asks him. “When you said your don't to hurt my feeling?” Esberstark answers her question with out feeling, he doesn't want Tracy to feel guilty about it. “Oh… Huh…” Tracy has no idea what to say. George is smirking at the conner. “We should keep going!” Esberstark suggest. “I thought you want to spread up!” George mans up and ask Esberstark. “I was saying if you want to go, you can go as much as you want! But I'm GOING TO STAY WITH TRACY!!!” Esberstark shouts at George to express his feeling. “Who said I don't want to stay with her? Do I want to find out what happens to her, why you always pick on me? What wrong. Huh? Better say it now before I punch your face!” George spilt it out in one second. “This is not personal, and I'm just trying to get the truth out also. But you are really not HELPING AT ALL!!! What make you think your sweet ass can punch me?!? Is that what you want ?!? A fight?!?” Esberstark pretends  he was not feeling anything about what Tracy said, but actually, he is hurting like hell in his heart, feels like his heart was like a rock keep falling from a well. “Now THAT is personal!!! I'm not scared to fight with an old Man, grandpa!” George can't hold back, he is being up a fight. “I'm just 48!” “You look like you are older than 70.” George rush to Esberstark and push him on the floor. Pulling up his hand and try to punch Esberstark face. “Stop it!! Both of you, you two are driving me crazy!” Tracy calls out and walk on, “we are going TOGETHER!” Tracy ignores them both and keep on. Esberstark push away George and throw him on the ground and walk with Tracy, George sits on the ground looking at Esberstark back and pull up a pack of grass temp to throw at Esberstark, but he change his mind and throw a pack of grass away and stand back up.


Finally, they arrive the hallway of the music room, "You ready?" Esberstark asks Tracy, Tracy nodded her head. "I will be right at your side, okay?" Esberstark walks in with her, George helps them to led the way and open the door, the moment he twist the handle "George! What the hell are you doing here? You said you'll be back! where were you? I looked all over the school."Ryan runs to George and gives him a good hug, "Yeah, I was walking with Tracy" George is thrilling to see his Bestfriend. "Come on, let head back, our show is dying because of you. I'm no good leader." Ryan says it very frustrating. "Do you mind wait for a bit more? just a for a sec." George want to talk before going with Ryan "Tracy begins now, don't wait for me. Esberstark will do the work." Then he turn around and run with Ryan." who is that old man?" Ryan asks Geroge. "A staff caught me talking with Tracy in the Greenhouse, he got pretty upset and he bit on me won't let me go, long story." Geroge thinks even if he lies he have to base on the truth. "You're a free man now!" Ryan keeps putting jokes on him.

"Start when you ready!" Esberstark doesn't want to rush her, "I'm born ready, let get start!" Tracy is very determent on this. They walk into the room, instantly Tracy feels dripping and falling into the darkness. "Tom? where are you?" Tracy loose sight of Esberstark and scream out. she is thinking he was right there, holding her hand. everything is so dark that she can barely see her own fingers, after a while things getting a little bit lighter, she is back in that room again.

The piano is in front of her, the door is behind her, facing the window give the creeps to Tracy. She sees Tom sit there behind the piano, she walk to the piano chair and sit dow. then she hears an Esberstark voice calling her, "Tracy! I'm right here!" Esberstark calls out for her alone at the music room, he can't see her either. "Where are you? why I can't see you?" Tracy is very frightening right now. "I don't know, I think is because we can't be in the same world... but still you can hear me, that use that advantage." Esberstark can't see a thing at his view, only a music room for him. "I'm still here with you." Esberstark trying to claim her. "What can you see now?" Esberstark asks Tracy, "Ah... you just walked out because of someone calling you. then I sit by the door facing the window. at that time, I should see the REFLECTION! there is the reflection. Gives me the creeps every time." Tracy feels a breezing blow throw at her back. " Now! Tracy, stop there." Esberstark command. "what? how am I gonna do that? Tracy got no clue. "try to focus on it! it should be a clue for us, maybe he or she can tell us what happened." Tracy takes few steps back, close her eyes and take a few deep breath, then she opens her eyes, things is getting clear now, not that fussy anymore. She walk to the window and look closer at the window. "I... I think I knew him... I knew him, Tom! I know who he is!" Tracy screams out.


"Hey Ryan, did you look at the sheet music I gave you?" George starting to ask questions at Ryan. "Yeah I did! pretty good song. I think you can play it." Ryan has no idea what is going on truly. "did you show it to others?" George wants to be sure about what he and Tracy have talked about. "Yes! I show to them! all of us, so we could decide to play it or not!" Ryan spilt out. "That why That why we can see Tracy!" Ryan stops there and his face is full of questions mark. "Look at your face! you should go see a mirror now!” George take revenge on Ryan. “Hey… That not fair.” Ryan feel shameful about this. “Come on, let get out of here” George change the subject.

“Hi George. Where were you?” Mka use her moan sound to attract George after he just arrive at the stage of rehearsing. “I'm going to explain now, gather up!!!” He clap his hand twis to notice them. Then he explain where were he and what happens to him.

“So… Where is that Tracy now?” Mka ask George with a little bit envy in it. “When she is done she will come here” as he speak Tracy run in to the hall. “I know who is the reflection!!! It Renny!” Tracy scream as she run in. “Who?” George asked.