Friday, 11 March 2016

BrightStar chapter seven, eight

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Chapter seven


Last chapter:
“So… Where is that Tracy now?” Mka ask George with a little bit envy in it. “When she is done she will come here” as he speak Tracy run in to the hall. “I know who is the reflection!!! It Renny!” Tracy scream as she run in. “Who?” George asked.

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“It Renny! He studies science, mostly spend time in labtory.” Tracy say more after she arrive and stop running. “The nerd!” Esberstark help George clear his question mark on his face. “He was a science student, always stay in the labtory do experiment and cauclatetion. Tracy always has been nice on him, he was isolate by others because of his intelligence.” Esberstark explain everything. “But there is no way he could killed me, he is such a great person.” Tracy clear for Renny. “Only one way to find out!” George suggest. “Let go find him! He should be like… 40 something like you?” George ask Esberstark. “Do you know his address?” Tracy look in to Esberstark and ask him. “You have ask the right person. Wait here, I'll go get it. I'll be back.” Esberstark jog away and left them here. “So… Gather up!” Don't waste anytime! Practice makes perfect!” George keep being a leader. “You still in a mood to play music even after all this?” Tracy ask George. “Why not? We are falling way behind!” George really wants this show to be perfect. “Do you have any idea how importants this show is? It HUGE! It gonna let our principle to decide our team go or the frankins go to the championship of or state! Which is why I need to recruit a singer! A bright star! You!” George explain to Tracy why he need her so much. “Mka can sing for you!” Tracy try to pass the ball. “She..ah...she can't sing, they all sing horrible.” George feel embarrass when talking about the girls. “They only have the look and dance, please! Sing with me!” George beg her. “How is anyone going to see me, I'm dead remember?” “You sheet music! Once we touch we can see you, same as the audience!” “How you gonna make everyone to touch it?” “ I've few ideas, I can pull this off” George end the conversation. “I'm back!!!” Esberstark run back into the hall from the cave he made. “I've got the address here, I never suspect him, after all he is just a lab guy. We can go take a visit.” Esberstark suggest a quick way. “I'll go with you!” George don't want to loose any chance to help Tracy to find out what happens. “Stay with me!” Mka grab George’s hand and try to make him stay. But George just push her hand off and says he will be back soon and walk with Esberstark. Mka standing there start feeling little jealous of Tracy now.


Chapter eight


So, Esberstark and George arrive at Renny apartment that Esberstark was hold. It was a truditional house that have three floors anda triangle roof top with a grace iron gate auroing the huge garden.Look from outside you can see the whole building is build from braicks which looks brownies the garden seems well care be there is no any other plants except for grass that trim to perfect land like what you see in golf. “But George notice at the side if the house the little coner grow a small little flower there, George recognise it the flower that Tracy like! The sea leavender! “Um...how exactly you going to ask the questions?” George have no idea how to do this anymore. “Like this! Watch me!” Esberstark lead his way and  ring the bell, after a minutes a old lady comes to answer the door, “yes? Who is this?” The old lady use her old age sound to ask. “Good afternoon lady, I'm detective Esberstark and this is my partner George, we have come a long way to look for Renny and ask about the incident twenty years ago. Do you mind we talk to your son? Esberstark says it like he was actually a detective. (To remind, Tracy stays in school because she have no way to get outside of the school) George is so nervous about this pretending, so he stay quite and follow Esberstark lead. “My son is gone!” A old man come behind the old lady says it. “I'm so sorry about this, would you like to come in first?” The old lady apologise for her husband rudeness. “Yes, please!” Esberstark feel greatful.

George follow Esberstark and he start to look around the house, it just perfect! What I mean is everything is putting where exact it belong! The carpet on floor you can see it has some age but it still clean and warm colours, plate that is rare and expensive collection is put inside the cupboard clean and in order. As they walk inside the old lady talk to them. “I'm Renny’s mom, you can call me Mrs Dalton, he is Renny’s father. This is our house. As you see I'm a 64 years old lady. I hope you can understand.” Renny's mom explain to George who she is.


  They have arrive the resting room of the house and Esberstark sit down where Mrs Dalton lead them. “My son Renny disappear after Tracy incident. I've no idea where is he now.” Mrs Dalton tell the answer before Esberstark even ask, “he was gone after two years of Tracy dead to be excect. Tracy was such a nice girl, she walk home with Renny few times for his project, they can make such a great art. She has been his only friend, hey are good friends and there is no reason my boy will hurt her, don't even mention about killing her.” Mrs Dalton eyes start silence cry with rolling tears. George feels sorrow about this scene, same as Esberstark, but still he have to keep on asking before Mrs Dalton change her mind to answer anymore qeustions. “Did Renny say any things or acting weirded before and after the incident?” Esberstark acting is such a profession. He can see Mrs Dalton eyes is dropping tears, but she stop sniffing and her eyes motion for a second. Then he knows she is bidding something. “He was all up high at that time in his brain.” Mr Dalton spilt it out. Mrs Dalton close her eyes shut and few drop of tears fall out to her cheeks, “oh please! Stop, he was such a good boy, he did nothing wrong.” She whisper. She is still blind with the love to her son. “Help yeah! He was such a good boy that put those needles in his godame veins. The definition now days are way different.” Mr Dalton is getting so angry now. “What make you say that? Was he not souber?” George ask. “Hell yea! He couldn't even tell me did he eating his dinner, spending all his money to buy those shit, I spend all my life on him and that what I got for return.” Mr Dalton say nothing good to Renny, but for the real reason that he is so angry is because he love his son so much that he don't believe the drugs is going to take his son away just by that easy. He use anger to replace forgiveness to fill the hole in his heart. He need the fresh air so he walk upstiars.  Left Mrs Dalton all alonesitting at the sofa. “There is no report saying your son take any medication , why is that?” Esberstark check the files agin and there were no mention about Renny drug addicts problems. “No one ever notice Renny, everyone just see the surface of the incident, they were all looking at Lyon and other Bulliers. I wish they have ask so they could help my son before I notice it was to late.” Mrs Dalton regret so much about she couldn't help her son sooner.
 “Do you know what drug he was taking?” George asks. “No… Even if I don't know what drug he was taking, If I know that he was even touching it, I would have stop him. He never talks about anything that bothers him or making him stress. But I knew he was having trouble with making friends, which is why I'm happy that Tracy was his friend!” Mrs Dalton feel abit comfort after memorizing of the memory of Renny. “Do you mind we go take a look of your sons room?” Esberstark ask nicely. “Yea sure! The second door to the left at second floor. I didn't change his placement, things stays the same as he was gone, I clean up the dust some times.” Mrs Dalton show the way. “Why no change?” George have just ask such an rude question. Mrs Dalton stand there froze. “Do you mind make us a drink?” Esberstark help him get out of this tragic moment, “yea...sure… I have lemon ice…, I'll go get some.” Mrs Dalton walk to the kitchen. “You fool! Are you out of your mind?! Why on earth did you ask that question?” Esberstark teaching George a lesson. “What? Why not?” George still don't understand. “Parents never give up! They never stop loving their child, most case missing child, the parents keep everything In place so when thier beloved child come home they can come back to thier home again. Even some case they got bad news, they will still keep it, so if you ask this kind of stupid questions again. Not just make them a hard time, also pointing there is no hope. Get it?” George nod to show he understand.

They walk upstairs and George look around to satisfied his curious. Wood floor steps on for the stairs cover with the finest carpet to warm up the cold tone in house, lighten up they way with rice white wall paper with hidden rose printing with slightly darker colour. Last decorating with simple frame on the wall, but the picture weren't simple! They are Mr Dalton and Mrs Dalton loving travel posture around the world, there were few pictures with Renny inside, but all without Mr Dalton.

George finish the sniffing and walk in with Esberstark to Renny's room. They were not surprise. All science stuff in the room, blackboard for the wall to cauclate the physic, formula for the chemical, a wood board for sticking picture for the research of the creatures. Poster around the room of different scientists. Lot of science project around the lab table, I'm serious, there is a lab table in his room. It a vast, huge variety room, image a room can put a adult bed, a huge bookcase, a lab table, and a huge desk for study. And planty of place for science and art project put on floor. Done thinking? Yea excectly, must be expensive. “She is right! He is a good boy.” Mr Dalton looking at a picture sitting at Renny bed and said. Mr Dalton standup and put the picture where it was placed, George can slightly see it a picture of Mr Dalton and Renny stanging front of the school gate. Guess it the first day of school.

Esberstark walk to the studying desk and notice it was strange, all books in room is placed at the bookcase, but only this science book put here on desk very neat, no papers for note, no pen using, so he take a closer look, he sees a lot of memo at the science book, he have no interested for studying it, but he row down and read there is a word pops up, each memo is writing with black or blue pen, but he saw there is a mark with green written ‘Letter’, Esberstark open that page, yes no trick, there is an letter, Esberstark pick it up and show to Mr Dalton. “It Renny writing! How could have I missed it for all this long?” Mr Dalton recognise it Renny writing and stuns by what he have missed for twenty years. “Oh my! God have mersy, what is the letter about?” Mrs Dalton come up with four cups of lemon ice on a silver tray, she almost faint when she heard this news, George react fast and help her hold the tray and Mr Dalton give his shoulder to her.

“Let see what is this about” Esberstark start reading the letter.

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Friday, 4 March 2016

Brightstar part four, five and six

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  The story has come to Tracy and Esberstark finally meet each other. Their conversation continue...

  "Why I haven't see you around in school?" Tracy ask Esberstark to find out more, "I have no idea, it fate I guess." Esberstark puzzle in his own brain. "How see your world look like?" "It was not clear, it wa blur can't focus. I can't remember what happens, I don't have my memorise, don't know who I am can't reginise anyone, I try to call out but I can't! The way I died is causing my respiratory system so weak, I don't feel hungry but I felt my sheet music was the only things that importants to me. I hold on to it, and each time I'm lost, there will be a strong feeling from my sheet music and tell me where to go. After giving times. I can breath, speak, even sing. Then I can start hearing things, people talk, laugh, cry, calling out. It all surounding me. Took me long time to learn how to not hearing them. After this wonderful time, the nightmare begin. I was swollen back to where I was traped. Back in that room. Dark. Cold. Alone. It like I still have a purpose in there. So I calm myself and search aroung in that room." "Wait! Do you know how long is that after you die?" George interrupting her again. "I don't know, I told you it was fussy. I guess it already five years later. Cause everyone dress different already. No the same way we dress," Tracy look into Esberstark eyes. "So I traped in that room again, I saw you walked out of that room, I stayed and wait for you, everything is happing all over again, when I get scared it get fussy again, the more not clear they are, the more I got scared. I do not think I can contral it, I know cause I've tried dos many times already, I guess my emotion will stay the same as I died." Esberstark hold Tracy toward to his chest and hug her very hard. "Don't be. I here now..." Esberstark clam Tracy down and try to protect her from hurting again. "Ah..." George try to speak. "Did I tell you to shut your mouth?!?" Esberstark got impatient for George rudeness. "No! I have an idea, Tracy, do you think you can go back and see what heppened?" George ask her for his smart ass "Yeah! I think so, but I've put lot of times to get out of there."  Tracy feel forceful about this. "How did you manage to get out of there?" Esberstark worried for her so he ask him to be sure. "I wait! I what till the thing pass on as the way they happened. Thing in there get more clear each time I got out of that room, so each time things get more clear for me to understand. I got carry out by the fire man. I able to get of that bed anytime when after get out of that room, but I never able to get out if this school, when they leave the school the bed I lie on will disappear and I fall on the floor. It like there is a huge forcefield blocking me out. " Tracy tell Esberstark what happened and going to happens. "Honestly I think gerige plans will work. But is it gonna be too much for you?" Esberstark is worrie for Tracy. "If it works, I want to do it, if it can really help me get out of this place. Yes!" Tracy said it with pleasure. "How did you came to my show at open day?" George want to understand more, "I saw and gear lot if people taking about the open day, and they also mention about you and your bang. Labels everywhere saying you gonna be the show main show. So I wonder since my word is getting more clear why not go see something new, so on that day, I follows the peoples,  walked in that hall. That how we meet!" Geroge feel it such a amazing journey she got there. "Alright then. Shall we beggin?" Esberstark suggested.


bs chapter6


  Geroge leads the way climbing out of the cave, Esberstark close the gate and begin to climb the way out, “Tract follow me, Geroge stay the last! no way I'm gonna let you fall and get us all killed” Esberstark say this to George for humiliate him in front of Tracy. Geroge has no chance to fight back so he climbs up in silence.


Since going down is already hard, no way climbing up will be easy. Although it hard for them, Esberstark has climbed this rock tunnels for 20 years. Sure he is capable of this easy level.


Half way at the tunnel now, such dark and wet in there, George have no choice but to put his creapy phone flashlight away and use full hand to climb, but once he put it away he regret it. It is so dark that he can only see the light from Esberstark flashlight such far away. “Ah!!!” Tracy calls out. She trip and slip her legs, luckily George reacts fast enough so he can spear an empty hand to support her, there is the awkward moment… His hand is putting at a wrong place at Tracy … Tracy secure herself “thanks, I guess” Tracy try to climb  to as fast as she could so she could get out of this awkward moment. “sorry I didn't mean to I was just trying to help.” George trying to explain to Tracy, but Tracy ignore him and keep climbing. She didn't scroll at him because her ex-boyfriend is up there, and for all of their sake, she don't want them to be dangerous just because she get angry. But all in George head his just thinking she's kind of real for a ghost.


finally, they have arrived at their tunnel exit. Esberstark pushes that tree trunk and gets his feet back on land.Esberstark pull out his hand and help Tracy goes up and walk away go on a reach to the school. “hey... anyone help me out?” George still traps in the tunnel alone. Why am I even here? I'm just playing the guitar… He thinks for awhile and he climbs up to the whole himself. He closed off the tree trunk and follow up, he was falling way behind.



 As they are running to the room that Tracy died. George speed up and speak to Tracy and whisper “hey! Are you ready for this?” George is worrying for Tracy. “what do you mean? We are on our way now! I can't back out right now.”Tracy don't want to say no for now, either she wants to she already said yes at the cave and there's no turning back now. “I mean. If it's me normal for anyone to accept this much in such a short while.” George just trying to cut her some slack. “Well, I'm not someone and is not too much I've waited for 20 years. And Esberstark was my boyfriend he is just older doesn't mean he's not the same person. I don't want to hurt his feeling.” Tracy tries to put all this in a normal view, “is that what you mean? After 20 years you still love him?” Geroge got envy about this, “No!”Tracy shout out than she turn her voice down and whisper “I didn't mean by that, it just, he Was my boyfriend, it been twenty years, I don't expect this to happens, it just!” Tracy can not explain her feeling to Esberstark. “You still love him, but just not like the way you use to be?” George helps her to express. “Yes… Just not like I use to be…” Tracy feel is guilty about this so she look away from George's eyes and look down. “anything wrong you can talk to me, you know that right?” George holds her hand and face to her but she shake his hand off from her hand and say “I don't need to, and why Tom can see me after you pass him that sheet music?”Tracy starting to get irritated that she scream so angry but secretly she got a happy feeling of George warn hand and her heart starts beating again. She has not Idea why this is happening. “I don't know... how can I know?!” George not sure himself also. “Why Ryan and the others can see me? did you show them aswell?” Tracy asked George for a quick answer, “ Oh shot! I gave it to Ryan so he could take a good look, then he said he wants to study it.” George has no idea what he have done. “How much you want to bet he shown to others?” Tracy finally clears her clouds now. “We have to go seek out! We should go ask Ryan!” George panic. “I think you go alone and ask will be enough.” Esberstark comes us from nowhere, Tracy and George got flabbergasted. “When did you got here? When you start to listen?” Tracy asks him. “When you said your don't to hurt my feeling?” Esberstark answers her question with out feeling, he doesn't want Tracy to feel guilty about it. “Oh… Huh…” Tracy has no idea what to say. George is smirking at the conner. “We should keep going!” Esberstark suggest. “I thought you want to spread up!” George mans up and ask Esberstark. “I was saying if you want to go, you can go as much as you want! But I'm GOING TO STAY WITH TRACY!!!” Esberstark shouts at George to express his feeling. “Who said I don't want to stay with her? Do I want to find out what happens to her, why you always pick on me? What wrong. Huh? Better say it now before I punch your face!” George spilt it out in one second. “This is not personal, and I'm just trying to get the truth out also. But you are really not HELPING AT ALL!!! What make you think your sweet ass can punch me?!? Is that what you want ?!? A fight?!?” Esberstark pretends  he was not feeling anything about what Tracy said, but actually, he is hurting like hell in his heart, feels like his heart was like a rock keep falling from a well. “Now THAT is personal!!! I'm not scared to fight with an old Man, grandpa!” George can't hold back, he is being up a fight. “I'm just 48!” “You look like you are older than 70.” George rush to Esberstark and push him on the floor. Pulling up his hand and try to punch Esberstark face. “Stop it!! Both of you, you two are driving me crazy!” Tracy calls out and walk on, “we are going TOGETHER!” Tracy ignores them both and keep on. Esberstark push away George and throw him on the ground and walk with Tracy, George sits on the ground looking at Esberstark back and pull up a pack of grass temp to throw at Esberstark, but he change his mind and throw a pack of grass away and stand back up.


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Finally, they arrive the hallway of the music room, "You ready?" Esberstark asks Tracy, Tracy nodded her head. "I will be right at your side, okay?" Esberstark walks in with her, George helps them to led the way and open the door, the moment he twist the handle "George! What the hell are you doing here? You said you'll be back! where were you? I looked all over the school."Ryan runs to George and gives him a good hug, "Yeah, I was walking with Tracy" George is thrilling to see his Bestfriend. "Come on, let head back, our show is dying because of you. I'm no good leader." Ryan says it very frustrating. "Do you mind wait for a bit more? just a for a sec." George want to talk before going with Ryan "Tracy begins now, don't wait for me. Esberstark will do the work." Then he turn around and run with Ryan." who is that old man?" Ryan asks Geroge. "A staff caught me talking with Tracy in the Greenhouse, he got pretty upset and he bit on me won't let me go, long story." Geroge thinks even if he lies he have to base on the truth. "You're a free man now!" Ryan keeps putting jokes on him.



"Start when you ready!" Esberstark doesn't want to rush her, "I'm born ready, let get start!" Tracy is very determent on this. They walk into the room, instantly Tracy feels dripping and falling into the darkness. "Tom? where are you?" Tracy loose sight of Esberstark and scream out. she is thinking he was right there, holding her hand. everything is so dark that she can barely see her own fingers, after a while things getting a little bit lighter, she is back in that room again.



The piano is in front of her, the door is behind her, facing the window give the creeps to Tracy. She sees Tom sit there behind the piano, she walk to the piano chair and sit dow. then she hears an Esberstark voice calling her, "Tracy! I'm right here!" Esberstark calls out for her alone at the music room, he can't see her either. "Where are you? why I can't see you?" Tracy is very frightening right now. "I don't know, I think is because we can't be in the same world... but still you can hear me, that use that advantage." Esberstark can't see a thing at his view, only a music room for him. "I'm still here with you." Esberstark trying to claim her. "What can you see now?" Esberstark asks Tracy, "Ah... you just walked out because of someone calling you. then I sit by the door facing the window. at that time, I should see the REFLECTION! there is the reflection. Gives me the creeps every time." Tracy feels a breezing blow throw at her back. " Now! Tracy, stop there." Esberstark command. "what? how am I gonna do that? Tracy got no clue. "try to focus on it! it should be a clue for us, maybe he or she can tell us what happened." Tracy takes few steps back, close her eyes and take a few deep breath, then she opens her eyes, things is getting clear now, not that fussy anymore. She walk to the window and look closer at the window. "I... I think I knew him... I knew him, Tom! I know who he is!" Tracy screams out.


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"Hey Ryan, did you look at the sheet music I gave you?" George starting to ask questions at Ryan. "Yeah I did! pretty good song. I think you can play it." Ryan has no idea what is going on truly. "did you show it to others?" George wants to be sure about what he and Tracy have talked about. "Yes! I show to them! all of us, so we could decide to play it or not!" Ryan spilt out. "That why That why we can see Tracy!" Ryan stops there and his face is full of questions mark. "Look at your face! you should go see a mirror now!” George take revenge on Ryan. “Hey… That not fair.” Ryan feel shameful about this. “Come on, let get out of here” George change the subject.

“Hi George. Where were you?” Mka use her moan sound to attract George after he just arrive at the stage of rehearsing. “I'm going to explain now, gather up!!!” He clap his hand twis to notice them. Then he explain where were he and what happens to him.

“So… Where is that Tracy now?” Mka ask George with a little bit envy in it. “When she is done she will come here” as he speak Tracy run in to the hall. “I know who is the reflection!!! It Renny!” Tracy scream as she run in. “Who?” George asked.

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Tuesday, 23 February 2016

BrightStar part three

“Waite… Tom? Esberstark?!? Is that you?!?”
Tracy run to that men and try to hug him but her feet was like sticking on the ground and she couldn't reach to him,and she feels very compress by the air. Then everything go dark around her, after a second she fall in to theroom she died, isis so scared and try to run and reach for help but she couldn't there was no one! It was so dark and cold Tracy start on screaming Tracy help!Help!! Tracy! Tracy! Tracy open back her eyes and she saw George shouting her name and hold her arms with both hand shanking her waking her up. “You okay? You freak me out man, what happened?” George open his eyes very huge and staring at her. “It was weird, thanks for waking me up, I'm fine now.” Tracyuse her right hand to massage her arm where George hold her very hard, she is pretty sure if she didn't wake up he will strangle her to death. “George! Can you help me ask him?!?” Tracy ask George to help her. “Ah… Okay. Excuse me? Are you Tom Esberstark?” George ask nicely to the old men that crying on the floor right now for the flower he plug. “SUSH!!! Who tell you that?!? Why are you talking to the air?! Stop the drama” Esberstark walk toward to George so close that you can though their eyelashes can touch each other and grabGeorgeshirt to pull him closer. George flabbergaste that he close his eyes and almost scramble on floor and point his finger to Tracy. “My name is Sverdlovsk. Don't try to fool me boy! What are you pointing at?” Esberstark hide his identity and ask George. “She is right there! Tracy kesinger!” Esberstark let go of his hand on George shirt and stand there freeze for few seconds. “Why shall I believe in this nonsense?” Esberstark don't believe him at all. “She died! I saw her body bring out from that room! Let her be in peace! Why you have to bring her up?!”Esberstark it feeling so sad about what happened and happening now. “Come on Tracy. Help me out!” George is begging at Tracy. “I spill my hot chocolate at him when's first day of school, it was at the library. Which is no drink allow. When the library lady saw us, you hold my hand and run together. Don't know why you did such stupid thing. You were not the one who drink it. After we run down the hallways we look at each other eyes for a minute. Then we laugh together with no reason. And that how we start.” Tracy say it with a very sweet smile on her. Esberstark heart’s finally starting to beat again after Tracy dead.George have to repeat her speaking again. “What about here? You remember?” Esberstark ask Tracy. Tracy take a good look around her, “this is it right? Our dream we always talked about, a fawless greenhouse with my design of the structure for the perfect environment for the sea lavender. You did it Tom!” Tracy start to cry, tears of joy. “You also remebe the joke? Esberstark ask after listen to George. “Never forgot you always says the sun from the west is the best cause is sun down, but I always says the east is the best from sunrise. I can see you have made it for both side.” Years keep rolling down to her cheeks. Esberstark didn't say another word and just ask them to follow, George can see his eyes were full of tears. But he didn't say a word cause he is still afraid of what happen.
 
Tracy now know why she was feeling safe when he followed George, cause it happens at same when she ran with Tom. She start feeling wrong about this feeling… Why is it happening to both of them…








  They follow Esberstark all the way. George keep thinking why he is trap in this, he was just trying to get her star, it noon now, he said he will be right back. He look back the passage they walk on grass all the way to his school. There is no turning back now. He curage up and move on. After walk on the grass for a long time, the grass is getting taller and taller as tall as a men hight. Then for a while Esberstark put his on a tree trunk and push! The tree trunk fall oven like a huge heavy door, Esberstark show them the way to go in and he close the tree trunk. It the perfect blending with the dry leafs. There is a rock stairs. They climb walk down there and wait for Esberstark show the way. Esberstark pull out his flashlight and shone the passage, it like the a walking in a tunnel that was roughly use explosive to blow the way up and don't have any supporting on it. More they go deeper the humidity is more high, the rocks is getting so slippy. George fall on the rock three times, such painful tunnel… he take out his phone and try to turn on his flash light, but than he find out the signal don't work down here…

When they feel the presure in their ears it almost the end of the tunnel there is to much moisture inside that you can see the water drops is dripping on the rock from the side. When they arrive there is a huge black metal gate that tall approach two meters! It was such huge peace of art, Tracy touch the gate pattern and feel the stroke on it, she regonse it sea lavenders. Esberstark pull out his huge key to put in the key hole and open it, Tracy get in first, George is the last one. “What! This is disappointing… I though in here will be more master and more graceful. But… It just papers… And boxes…” George stop talking when he feels Esberstark is staring at him. He is right! Nothing special at here, just a huge cave with lot of papers and files and so on…

“Why you being is here?” Tracy ask when she look around this place and pick up a paper to look at she see her names are on it. “She is asking why you bring us here?” George help her to ask him, but actually he want to ask more than Tracy dose. “It save at here to talk about… Make me believe what you said up there!” Esberstark still don't fully trust George. Geroge have no idea how then he feel his poket got something, he grab it it Tracy sheet music! It was just return back from Ryan. He pass it to Esberstark, once he touch it and he reginise it and memory of this “this is Tracy, TRACY!!” Esberstark look up and see Tracy stand there. “You can see me?!?” Tracy is thrill. “Yes!” Esberstark run to her and hug her that he did the same hug as 20 years ago… He still love him the se way as twenty years ago. “Ah… Have you forgotten me?” George interrupted such good mode of it. “Who is he?” Esberstark ask Tracy. “Ah… He is a guitar player at a bang and try to recrue me. Than… It a long story.” Tracy got irritated once she talk about George. They hold on to each other more for awhile “why you never came back Tom?” Tracy ask Esberstark what happened back then. “I can fully explained that.”


“At the time when I was called out, the death if yours already start. When I arrive the labtory, there was no one, just some… Lab stuff that I don't understand. Then I turn back try as fast as possible to come back to you Tracy, I did try hard. But than Lyon Racer show up, he said “well well! Look what we got here? It Tracy lover baby Tom!” I try to run pass him but he swing his baseball bat to swing at my right leg. I fell on the floor, I tried to get up but he hit me at the back again. I'm sorry Tracy I couldn't get there in time. They drag me to the hall and force me into the storage room torture me in there try to get where you are. They even… Even… I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave it up, I though I can get there in time. But they knock me out. When I wake up the party beggin, it was their music that wake me up. I run outside the door was locked I scream for help. Finally there is few not yet drunk kid help me unlock the door. I ran to your room right away, my leg was in very bad shape. I ran at fast as I could. When I arrive there is fire coming out from your room, firefighters sucre the area and block me going in. I tell them you are inside, few of them go in and found you, when they come out… You already burn to death. I couldn't stand the pain and my legs pain at the same time. I faint. When I wake up at hospital it already two days after. I tell everything I know, so they investigate those assholes. They didn't live for long for somereason. Lyon lead the way, he died when the investagtion. The cops were asking him question, he panic when he heard you were dead. He knew it was bad for him. So he was going to tell the whole thing, but he died right away when he talks. It was poision but no trace. After his death, others freak out and went to hide, Michael dead after four months from smoking meth. Later on Kerry couldn't take the pressure so he committed suicide. After that the others disappear. No one finds them no baby no trace. So there is no hope of finding your killer. After graduation I becan a detective, but not for long. I was caught to steeling your files, they suspended me but never found the files, they don't care anyway. They are what you are staring right now boy!” Esberstark looking at George walking aroung like a five years old kid went to the Museum. “So I become a cleaner at your school, to hope I can keep investigate what happened, that how I build the green house” Esberstark end his story and looking at Tracy. Tracy take the turn to tell her story to him and they beggin to match up what happened on that day to be exact.

To be continue ...

Friday, 19 February 2016

Bright star part two

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 "What do you mean by you are deceased?" George is still so confusing about what Tracy said. He keep trying to put the pieces together. "You all not suppose to see me, I've tried for years, no one sees me, even before I'm died! " Tracy can not hold on to herself, she has been depressing for almost 20 years. "Alright. Slow down! I can see you are upset, I think you really gonna need my help. Let go somewhere private" George knows she need some where more isolate so he could listen to her better. "Guys! Keep on what you are doing. I'll be back, Ryan help me out!" George grab her hand softly so he won't hurt her, Tracy follow his step did not knowing where he is going, bit she felt safe when she walk with him. 
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They have arrive to a place at the roof top. Tracy is not familiar around here, but this place is so pretty, there is a glass green house such greatness design up here, there are mostly Tracy favourite
 flowers sea lavender and all kind of Tracy loved one. They go inside to the green house, the windy sound is gone, the sun shine is different "what is this place? Where is everyone?" Tracy ask George when she take a look around inside of this green house and touch the flowers. There is yellow, pink purple, all different kind of growing ways. "Not much people come up here, only the workers who take care of this flowers comes here." George seems so clam in this place.

 "You can say it here now. "Alright. You have to go back like 20 years, my name is Tracy Kesinger, born at 6th of September 1972, I died at 25th of January 1996. That day was the date of graduation party, I was going to be singer on stage, meant to be the new star. I was so nerves, that why my boyfriend Tom Esberstark help me to practice, he didn't really know how to play music, but he is a such great listener. I was singing to him, then someone knock on the door and ask him to come out, he said he'll be back soon, but he never did. Later I heard he was in the party already." Tracy eyes start wobbling tears, George try to focuse on what she is saying but he just couldn't get his eyes out of her stunning eyes she got there. She use her Sleeves swap of the tears on her eyelashes, she take a deep breath and keep on to her tragedy. 

"There was I.  Forgotten. Alone. Cold. Waiting for whom that never will come back. It was so quiet, everything seems not alive anymore, I seat at the floor behind the door. The tree shadow shown on the floor at the music room, it looks there there is a monster with claws trying to grab my legs, that scares me so much so I scrum together more and I stop look at the shadow I looked at the moon, it was so bright! Such huge and full of hope, so I make a wish to the moon beg Esberstark  will come back When I open my eyes I saw something at the window reflection, I've got one second to focuse on that reflection, I can roughly see it a reflection of a face looking at me. I startled and turn my head right away but there is no one. I start to feel something is wrong so I grab my sheet music and my lyrics plan on stop waiting and go to my show on my own. Then the haters came," "Who?" George interrupts her speaking. "The haters!" Tracy got irritated. "So... Do they bully you or something?" George wanna understand more. "Not really, but they try their best to make me a hard time and keep forcing Esberstark stop dating with me. But Esberstark didn't give up, I guess he just love me but can't held till the end. I guess he got bored of me... That why he left." Tracy starting to think to much in her head. "Hey hey! But make yourself like this, keep on! What next?" George try to get her spirit back up. "I walked to the door then I heard Lyon Racer calling so creapy" Tracy?... Where are you? Aren't you going to be the STAR! That sing on the stage?! Well you know, I've bump in to Esberstark in the party all alone. So... I wonder. Where is his girlfriend? So of course I went to ask him, then he said you HERE! IN THIS ROOM!" Oh my god! Then he bang on the door so hard that make such loud banging, I...I star... Startle and fell on the floor." It is so painful for Tracy to bring this back up. "Do you need a break?"  George ask very soft hope that can help Tracy calm down. "No, I want to tell. So he keep on going. "Why don't you come out now and have some FUN with us?" "No! I'm not coming out for you, go away!" I tried to fight them away. "Alright then! You choice! You never be out again." After Lyon said that I can hear he is putting a key inside of that key hole slowly on purpose so I can hear it. I ran to the door try to stop this happing. Then he twis his key so fast so it locked before I tried to twis the handle. The locking sound of that room is still feels like it surounding me right now. I... I kept trying to twis the handle but it stiff locked... I couldn't ... . Tracy is breathing to fast and consuming by the fear of her memory. George quickly grab a flower and plug it to let Tracy smell it aroma, he pick the right choice. It her favorite flower, it sea lavender. She clam herself down and keep speaking. "They keep laughing at me outside the door, and say I did this to myself, I'm the one who said I'm not coming out. I kept screaming for help and I beg them to... But they never did. They just kept laughing. "How many people were there? What their names?" George asking for more information. "There are five people, Lyon Racer, Gary Wolf, Michael Dance, Ka Hell, ken Traylon." Tracy answer his question very patiently. She have know idea why she keep telling him this, but she felt great by doing this. She is guessing because this has been depressing for very long time. "So what happens next?" "They kept laughing and show me the music room key at the door window "I really need to say thanks for you beloved friend who own this things, I guess he don't need this anymore" I can see Finch names was on the key tag, then I'm so afraid of what did they do to Finch." "Hold on, who is Finch?" George have no clue who is he. "He is a staff that clean our school, he is a old poor man. When you say hello to him the time you get in your classroom is the time he can finally done turning his head to look back. Funny right? So I'm pretty sure it easy to take those key from him. Then I watch them walked away and laugh at me. I kept screwing for help, I saw my watch it 7:36pm party start already. I should have been readying for on stage, why no one notice and look for me? Where was Esberstark? I kept waiting but he never came. I stared to get tired and slide on the door and seat on the floor. Looking at the window, THERE! The reflection on the window show that face again! The face I saw before Lyon come. I turn my head right away and there is no one again. I did not care I scream for hep, but there was no one. After around 5 minutes, there are some gases come in from the air way, I've no idea what going on. I stop trying to call for help cause I know there will be no one. The gases smells horrible when I breath in it burn my throat and I kept caughting. Soon I couldn't breath in and out, I knew there is the end, I grab on to the last things I can hold and that the sheet music you stole from me. And I Iie down there, buring in my chest, full mouth of my own blood... Here I am! Trap! No in or out in this school!" Tracy finish her tragedy. "Wow! Such sad story... But not really persuasive. It hard to believe this could happens to you. But I just google search... It says in this school twenty years ago was a small fire only, never mention there is a body or gas leak?" George show her the searching result. "I don't know there is an fire..."Tracy are very confuse. 
"WHAT ON EARTH are you doing here all alone in my green house?!?" There is a men around 40-50 years old come in to the green house. "I... I'm not alone." George answer. "You think I'm a fool?!? There is only you, and GOD BLESS! What on earth have you done to my sea lavender?!?" That men looking at the sea lavender George pick for Tracy on the floor. "Why he can't see he?" Tracy whisper behind George. "I don't know." George is so scared right now and froze there. "Waite... Tom? Esberstark?!? Is that you?!?"

Monday, 15 February 2016

BrightStar

Bright star 

    There is an Awsome guy name George, he is very good at his instrument, especially his guitar, he start play it since 3 years old, not force to, he was born to be with misic, and he just love the freedom of floating in music.
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  Tracy walking around the collage looking for her room and put down her belongings. “Ouch!”
Tracy,stop talking when he look up and saw that pairs of sapphire blue eyes infrount of her “I .. A..yeh , ah it okay ,I can take that bump” George say it very sloppy cause he is also stuns by the hazel green eyes she have there “do you need a hand for your stuff ?”Geoge ask very nicely. “I think I can take it myself, thank you” Tracy walked away left to find her room.

  After the settlement and a night if rest ,it open day !!! She follow all others and go to the hugest Hall she ever been in her life and sit down with others ,the show beggin , there was a bang presenting at the stage ,the show were Awsome, Tracy felt in love with the music going on stage, she never knew the a group of student would capable of playing music such great than she reginise the guitar guy, it was the guy she bump in yesterday, she imidintly feel so embarrassing about it, but than the girls team show up, their dance steps are amazing and there she is! The perfect girl that stands out at the middle. Tracy just feel so great that she do not want to leave this place for first time in her life.


  She stays until everyone is gone, the instrument were left on stage, she slowly walk on stage and look around, she look and she can feel it, she can feel the power of music still reacting to each other, she can smell the the sweat the nervous the rusty guitar and the wood instrument on stage, she look at the audience the light shine on her directly so she could not see under the stage but she can still feel the eyes looking at her (she is imaging ) she turn back and walk forward to the instrument, and though the piano, the moment she put her hand on the piano pad she feel a struck to her hand she was shock and let go of it, she walk few steps back and accidentally kick a guitar, lucky she act fast and grap it in time so it would not fall, she hold on the guitar, it a classical guitar with heavy wood for the body, she put her fingers on the strings and swing over it, she feel so great so she keep swinging it randomly than she start singing with her wonderful voice “Say something I'm giving …” “You should ask before you touch others stuff” Suddenly come from nowhere a voice speak to Tracy, she startle and try to look for the voice, but then she reginise the voice !it the guitar player! “I know you, you are the one who play this guitar” Tracy speak to the voice direction ,”indeed ,not yet introduce, I'm Geoge, where you from, I never saw you before ”said Geoge with courious. “I'm Tracy, I'm sorry I shouldn't been here, I'll be gone” said Tracy with frighten voice she walked away and go back to her room. “You scared her off, mate, you should use better tone to girls not just your music” said Ryan in a great mode, walk in after Tracy run away “Maybe you should treat girls harder like you treat the drums!” Geoge jokes “I'm not gonna beat them like drums, I'm a gentlemen ,gentle men ,I treat them softly, hungry?” Ryan laugh at Geoge“come on, stop it. Let get something to eat, you are buying for making fun of me” Geoge put his hand on his BestFreind shoulder and walk with him “I was just joking, but you really need to change your tone. ”Ryan said it with smile. 

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 The next morning cause her last night she just change her cloths and just put on her sleeping coat and went to sleep,Tracy just woke up with foggy eyes, she get up and take her morning stuff and ready to get to wash room to clean up ,she open her room door and BAM! Someone stand at her door when she walked out she bump on him and bouns back “Ouch Jesus who... ?”Tracy look up and see Geoge standing there look like tried to knock on her door, he look at her and see her undress well so he immediately turn his head away , “You? How did you know I'm here?” Tracy ask counfusely. “I ..I was trying to look for you!”Geoge panicked and put both of his hands up. “What do you want?” Tracy ask with a gate between them. “Can you come by to the hall ?”Geoge ask. “What for ?” Tracy asked. “You will know!” Geoge said it and walk away. Tracy left their with confusing and think for a whole day and decide to give a shot. 

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Tracy walk in to the hall with fear, she stand middle of the hall and turn 360’ spread her arms to feel the atmosphere in there, the moment when she start to fall in it“ HEY ! I see you come !”said Geoge by shouting. Tracy freak out down down her arms and put it around her chest, “ ah ..yes I came, what do you want now ?” Tracy asked. “Sing! Go! Stage! Go on!” Said Geoge. Tracy didn't even bother to aske him again and walk in stage, looking at the only audience stare at her with out blinking or any emotion, “Go on! Sing !” 

She behing with cracking voice cause she is so scared cause Geoge staring at her “Hey hey hey ! What wrong with you ?that not what I hear last time” Geoge shout to her. “I can not sing when you stare at me like I punch your face before!” Tracy shout back to him. Geoge turn around “can you sing now?!” Tracy start relief right after Geoge turn around, she start singing right away, it was beauty in heaven. After her singing Geoge forgot his staring and just fall in her voice , he need a minutes to realise she stopes singing “oh ah … You have a great voice! Really you do , but ah… You need to train more in order to make your lungs stronger and follow up the beat, you know what I mean?” Geoge said it when he is still dreaming in her voice “come around when you have time, I'll help you,okay?” Geoge said to her and walk away left Tracy stand there alone do not know what to do and pissed by not knowing   But secretly she is sooo glad that he said he love her voice.

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“Did you see her ?” Geoge ask Ryan at the next day at practice room. “Who?”asked Ryan. “ you remember the girl I talked to after the open day ?” Geoge trying to make him remeber. “I did not really saw her, I was assuming you talking to a girl cause I know you” said Ryan. “ you wanna say what going on ?” Ask Ryan with suspension eyes trying to get information from Geoge. “ nothing I just though she would come.” “Oh…! Poor Geoge is in love !!!” Said Ryan with sneaky smile on his  face. “Shut up !” 

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At night Geoge went to Tracy room and try to knock on her door. Knock…knock… “Who is it ?”said the girl in the room , Geoge reginise not Tracy voice, that girl open her door “What ?” “Um … I'm looking for Tracy.” Asked Geoge. “Who ?” “ Tracy! I guess she is your roommate or something ,I saw her yesterday at here!” “No… Never heard of her, I think you got the wrong room.” “ but she was right…” Geoge stop talking cause he saw at the end of the hallway Tracy standing there looking at him , he identified her and start walking to her, Tracy turn around and start run away, Geoge saw that and run along try to call out her name. He keep running but then she vanish! He lost her and he could not find her, he have to give up and walk away. 
  He turn around ready to walk away than “Holy …! What?! Where ?! You scared the crab out of me!” Geoge startle cause Tracy was just standing at his back looking at him. “Why you here ?” Tracy said. “How did you do that ? You ghost or something?” Geoge still a bit shock after she show up. Tracy face motion change and said “even I tell you you would not understand…” She whisper. “Why you are in that room yesterday? That girl said she never heard of you, who are you?” Geoge finally comeback together and ask “She was parting whole night, I borrowed her room, she do not know a thing cause she was drunk and sleeping at the others boys arm.” Tracy said it very clearly so it easy for Geoge to understand. “Why? You do not have your own room?” “Yes I do. Just do not like it.” “Why you did not come to our practice ?” Geoge ask to try to find out why. “Why I have to come?” Tracy ask him back. “Cause I like your singing ,and i think I can make you a star!” Geoge said it fill with excitement. “No ,I do not want to, people do not see me.” “They wil when you become a star!” Geoge walk forward and grab her shoulders. “What makes you think that?” She started to feel annoy about all this. “Cause I just knows, please!” Tracy did not answer and use her hand slide over to smack away Geoge hands on her shoulder then just walk right pass him. When Geoge turn around she was already gone.

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  Geoge could not get her out of his head, he keep think about her and her singing still stay in his head, but he has no idea how to find her, when he start to get to frustrating, some one walk in to the classroom, he looked back and saw her, there she is! Tracy! Right there. He keeps hoping tine can go faster.

The end of the class, he ran to her and try to follow her so he could talk to her, “Tracy please! I want you, I need a singer!”Geoge keep trying to follow up, but it was so crowed in the hallway, he could not see her then she is gone when everyone back into the classroom.

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Geoge decide to leave her alone so maybe she will come around, he go back to the leeson he should be, “stop stalking me!” Geoge freak out and turn back , Tracy were sitting there stare at him and crossing her hands front of her chest, “What… How… When did you? Can you please be my singer ?” Geoge asked by a supprising tone, since he is so desperate Tracy finally said yes to him.

   “Why you want me to be your singer?” Tracy ask Geoge when he is preparing for thier first practice. “Cause when I hear your voice, I know. I know you will be the one who sing by me and be my star!” Geoge say it with out thinking and determine. “I've been here for years there no way people could see me!” Tracy slip out. “What do you mean ? You are here for years? No one can see you? If you were studying here I would have saw you. You must be new student, right?”Geoge feel like a breezing run though his back. “You going continue or not? I still do not know why you can see me after all.” Tracy is getting cross. Geoge try to open his mouth and ask again “Don't ! Even think about it!” Tracy scroll at him try to make him stop talking. “Fine...but”Geoge is stubben. “Just STOP! Will you ?” Tracy got irritate by Geoge foolish. “Okay… Let get on with it. No one talk to me like that way.You know? ” “Well… I'm no one”Tracy said it with pride. “You really trying you best to mess with my head, are you? No one … I really don't understand.”“ I hope you never understand.”Drop of tear flash of light reflect at her eye coner for a second. Geoge though he see it but he do not know what he just saw, he shake his head go back on his business. 
  He start play on his guitar and ask Tracy to join in anytime she feel like it, Geoge play on and keep the music gentle nice and smooth on his way. Tracy starts to calm and relax, staring to enjoy the atmossphere. She begin her way to sing and it was beautiful. Geoge even almost stop playing, but than he realise this is just making him play on more music and inspiration, than he knew this girl is going to be her bright star.
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  Days past on, Tracy singing skill is getting more skilled, Geoge decide to introduce her to his mate and The Queen. “Hey, do you think is time for you to meet our team?” Geoge ask her very soft. “What?! Why shall I?!” Tracy just make the air very incense. “Well...I thought” Geoge feel agonise about this. “Stop thought ing! Stop thinking your own way! How many times I've to tell you people can not see me?!?” Tracy do not have her temper contral anymore, “You did said that, but you never explain why, each time I ask you just shut silence or turn around, be clear now. And I never think for my own! I'm helping you” Geoge is coming out from his skin, he is getting very piss now, “Help me… Help ME ?! Is that what you think for the whole time? I do not need help, you are the one who need help, you are the one who beg me to help you, I do not need any babysitter, even I tell you you would not understand a thing I'm telling you!” Tracy ran away, she forgot her lyrics book behind cause she was to angry to remember, it was her own writing lyrics book never shown to anyone. Geoge comedown for a moment and walk to her stuff and pick it up, it was a simple old sheet music, very old oddly old, Geoge try to call out for Tracy, but she was gone already. Geoge though it was nothing than commit oneself to keep for her just for now. 

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 The next day Tracy approach secretly at the rehears of the Christmas show. She stand behind the hall gate watch from there, she hear the music start turn on than there he is, Geoge playing the guitar, testing the music. 

Then she saw there is a girl she can not put away her eyes, Tracy do not know her name, but she is surround by other pretty girls, but this Queen is most stand out one, others were only just stand behind her, they start on rehearsing the dance, Queen was very beautiful, Tracy can not get away from looking at her, “Hey! Who are you? What are you looking at?!” A voice come from Tracy back, Tracy was shocked and didn't expect this would happens. “I…I was looking for Geoge.” He did not care and just grab her jacket hat and drag her into the hall and ask “Hey! Geoge! She said she knows you,”He wave his hand so he could jiggle her around, “Yeah! She is my star! Stop doing that Ryan, I thought you treat girls very nice?” Geoge said “Oh! Sorry about that! Did not know you know her, I thought Feakin Team was try to send a spy to copy out songs again.” Ryan felt making a monkey out of himself. “Come on Tracy! Did not know you were coming come meet out team!” Geoge is so happy that he can finally have Tracy in his team, “Let me introduce! I'm the team leader! The guitar guy and the main singer, the one who drag you in is Ryan! Play drums and my BestFriend!” Tracy take a good time to look at Ryan, he seems like a nice guy. Not to bad on looking, has a memorable ginger hair, guessing he is from England according from his accent and his hair, his dressing style is very random can not tell he is a drummer, looks like he is just a kid who play on street putting something comfortable on himself, he would not look straight in to Tracy eyes cause he still feeling sorry about what just happens and just wave his hand and say hi, “And he is my base guitar guy Crew, he is very good at his guitar but not good at talking and do not need to mention about his singing,” Tracy look at him and nothing caught her eyes but his hands is full of bandage so she knows that he is very new to guitar, but he did not talk so she could not  guess where he came from. “Move on the my Miss Piano Sherry, she ah… Can play piano?” Sherry say hi to Tracy and Tracy said back hi to her, nothing pops up from her just a cool girl who dress so cool and play piano gracefully, “next is our main dancer team, basically is our team life support. Ifwe doing this without them, our team would lose so much vote for the out school compotition, girls introduce yourself!”said Geoge with excitement. “ I'm Mka, it means the queen, here are my girls.” Tracy couldn't look away from her, now she understand the meaning of The queen. She have the perfect curly blond hair, perfect skin tone that can match any cloths, and the way she dress it precise, nothing can do more, Tracy is envy at her. “Hello new star, I'm Hellen the girl who dance just next to Mka, nice to meet you hope we can dance together, you have a nice body shape.” Tracy notice this girl did not have any make up on her she looks very natural, but Tracy saw inside her highhills is hiding so many tape on her ankle, Tracy knows she is having a hard time to follow up with Mka. “ hi I'm Snowy, dump my real name long time ago, nice to meet you.” Snowy is dramatic opposite of Hellen, silver hair, heavy makeup and lot of asseserise on her hair band, neck less, rings, bracelet… She is very comfortable dance with highhills, all famous brand on her. “Me, me next! I'm Julian! Dance at the back! But I'm mostly the one who plan our steps.” Not hard for Tracy to tell she is very self narcissism, messy curl hair and too much perfume. “ I'm Vichy, dance at the middle and the one who find our dance music pattern, so on … Walen … Pinkie … Grinch. 

  “Okay … Done with our ‘nice to meet you’ thing” go back in what you were doing!” Tracy walk to Geoge and wanna to talk to him at private.
  
“How is this happing?” Tracy ask Geoge. “What you mean? Cause you were sneaking up at us?” Geoge keep teasing her. “Why? You asking me why? Why you still do not get it?!? You all are not suppose to see me! I'm deceased!” Tracy can't stand Geoge stupidity. 

Part one ends. 

Monday, 9 November 2015

Days of Reality- Four Season

The four season  
( A sad story of Ariel ,Edson)

The story starts under the eyes of snow, the combination between cold wind and water 
The mix between refreshing and purity, it all happens in the start of the year: spring 

It all happen in a normal school where a boy name Edson were is very popular among the bullies and a girl named Ariel who was a shy pretty gorgeous nice girl  

Ariel was often bullied just because of her shyness  and others girls envy her beauty,body shape and her kindness and often take revenge on her by telling their group of bullies to bullying her. And that's  when Edson met Ariel 

Edson was one of most popular among the group of bullies because of his cruel personality but deep in his heart he is a very kind hearted person where he help everyone who's in need . He will try his best to help other but all he get is negative ,things never worked out on him 

Edson joined with the group of bullies because he was trying to be cooler to find his love one but what he doesn't know is that  he makes people around him disgust him and isolated him but he doesn't know is  that  the answer was always by his side just that he treats her badly and keep on injecting pain to her , but she always see the good within him and that's why she alway forgive him and what keep reminding her that he needs her help ,he know something is wrong but just don't know where 

The seasons begin by now !

Ariel often hides on the rooftop of the school just to avoid the bullies from trembling her lunch , but this time was different , she hear someone was sniffing , she follow the noise ,it was Edson ! She was flabbergasted she ask , "why are you here Edson ?"with a curious and cute voice like always , Edson shouted " I've been watching you ! Don't think you can hide from me !!!"He shouted as his voice cracked and a tear roll down his face  . " who do you think I am that you could lose sight of m?” Ariel was about to walk away ,but her consciousness  is telling her stay to help cause deep in her heart  she wanted  to help him because she feel like he is worth it , but while she decided  to turn around he whispered just loud enough that she could hear ' why ? How did you do it ? Why don't you cry ? Why you are so positive ? those eyes of yours are always filled with hope within it. "That's all I have in me nothing but anger and hatred ! Why do you have such characteristics so precious that I am dying for ?!?"ariel answer without a doubt , "cause I know ! I know you're not being yourself , I can help ! I know you can do more than the Edson you are right now.   I know the Edson you are right now can be a better Edson "She speak softly with sorrow . "how do you know ,!?? No One ! No One ! Ever look at me like you did !" Edson shouted. He was very moody to even digest what Ariel was trying to say, "I can help ! You just have to let me ! " 
Ariel said with a mild voice  . ' NO! Go away ! No one need a freak
 to help !" As He push her down , she fall on the floor and her glass of milk broken and hurt herself as she fell to the floor , her hand instantly start bleeding so fast that the blood spilt out in no time no matter how hard she press against the wound ,  Edson was shock for what he had done and ran away as fast as he could , after the accident he went home and he couldn't get Ariel out of his mind .He couldn't sleep neither could he eat every time when he tried to closes his eyes and go to sleep the pairs of purple eyes of Ariel that when she look up to Edson when her hand is bleeding out the her eyes were still full of hope when she is helpless , at that night he never forgot the the disappointed in those purple eyes of Ariel as she stare into him asking for help, now his head is  clear and start run though what she was talking about ...


It's been a week since she came back to school , the doctor  said that her right hand may never be able to  move again .Arial  was once a great painter but now she might never be one again , she never cry about it ,neither did she felt the need to  , never did she  
regret trying to speak to Edson on the roof that day .


After class, Ariel walks  to her locker that is located at the end of the corridor ,she was shocked by what she see in front of her  ,the locker she treasured was destroyed and her precious  painting tools are shattered on floor, she noticed jack is standing at the side with  bunch of bullies who were laughing at her and say " you won't need this anymore ,thanks for Edson ! your hand is useless now! You should be grateful that I am doing a favor for you 'said jack with a psycho cocky mode ,suddenly they stopped and seem shocked for what they see was out of their expectation ! Edson was kneeling on the floor ,picking up the shatter pieces as they fall from the locker , Ariel started to cry not because she is sad about the shatter pieces of her precious tool is that Edson is helping her, the one who was always trying his best to make her life miserable has changed ! The bullies were mad and shouted furiously " what on earth is that about ? We were such a good team together ! " jack push his shoulder and ask , Edson can't be bother to even explain to them , he said 'Let me tell you what JackAss, there is no we anymore there is only  me and you ' " what's that u just said ?! You want to quit ? 
For what ?  for that bitch in front of you ? " screamed Jack " punk tell you what, she have a name and it's Ariel"said Edson with a furious voice " You have changed, a lot, what happen to you ? What did that witch gave you ?! " jack shouted as tears wobbling in his eyes . " we are done you get it ? " said Edson and Jack ran away filled with shame and betrayal and shouted " you will pay for this ! Mark my words !"

Edson continue picking up the tools on the floor after the bullies walked away , the haters standing next to the scene start spitting out nonsense "what did you do you dirty slut ? You flirt with him didn't you  , what you have done to make him this loyal ? ...."Edson picks up the leftovers that the bullies created ,then he walked up to Ariel   and hand it over to her , she tried to grab hold of  it with her right hand , but her hand were just too weak to hold on , her hand was just too  shaking , but then Edson grab hold of her hand and put it into her pale hands , she look up to his eyes , and first time in Edson life , he smile , but a horrible one , he still have lot more to learn , but Ariel felt painful and responsible , she hold the tools she treasured since the day she brought them with both hands ,and throw it to the rubbish bin behinds her , Edson was shocked and asked" why?" , she finally cry in front of everyone and say ' like they said , I don't need this anymore ...' Then she ran away with tears...



Edson didn't just hang up ,he pick up the trash and bring it home , he fix everything as best as he could , he is a carpenter after all he fix the broken paintbrush , the paint box , and he even make new sketchpad for her , it was not a random design in it , he hidden something in it ... Something important to him .


The summer holiday is  around the Corner, Edson has done fixing the stuff and he is ready to give it to Ariel , but he waited on roof everyday trying to look for her but she never came , he couldn't find her anywhere , he start begging the god for forgiveness of all his sin and that he could see her again , but god never listen ...
The next day he go on rooftop as he always does, but not expecting much , when he stand outside the door and be hoped to see Ariel there  than he instantly hear crying and screaming voice , he immediately recognise it's  Ariel voice ,than he hear the bullier 
voice shouting at Ariel ' you think I don't know what you did to Edson ?!?  You think I don't know you hiding away ?!? I follow him everyday !!! Waiting for my revenge !!! You stole him for me and I'll make you pay !!!' Other guys drag her down on the floor and hold her hands so hard , her left hand start to bleed again , she try to call for help but she knows, she knows no one will hear her scream, jack tear her clothes off and try to rape her , ' you enjoyed having "fun" with Edson?Now it's my turn !' Jack shouted .edson hear it and try to open the door but then he found out it was lock he use all the force he has To open it, but it not working  than he slow himself down and think and look around he saw a Fire Extinguisher, he use it to break down the door handle and follow the voice and ran to them and shocked for what he is seeing is making him so piss , but then he felt so angry that he ran to jack and fight with all his might !! Trying to protect Ariel , but it's too late , jack has already raped Ariel , 'you come any closer than I'll make her bleed quicker !' Jack is holding a knife standing behind Ariel with a bruise eye Edson punch , and pointing the knife at her hand 'she already lost one hand , do you want her to lose another ?' 
Jack said so just to get him away from the trouble knowing that Edson will get him into , Edson have no idea what to do , Ariel had already bleed too much and started to faint ... Others bullies were trying to take turn raping  her , but Edson was mad , so mad that u can smell fear from the Bulliers , he can't hold himself anymore  he ran to jack , he was so freak out and stabbed Edson , Edson doesn't care, he punch jack as hard as he could jack faint not because his broken ribs and bleeding nose but because he is filled with fear , others ran away long before Edson lost control , Edson go back to Ariel and hold her tightly and try stopping the blood ,' you're hurt !' Ariel said  softly while she saw the wounds on his left stomach and bleeding hands because of the fight  , Edson keep calling her name , but she didn't respond  , she is losing her life bit by bit, she keep blacking in and out , the next thing she knows is she wake up at hospital ...



Beep!... Beep!.... Beep ... She wake up as the voice of ECG woke 
her up ,everything was so bright, the light mix with sunshine shone on her eyes , she tried to cover her eyes ,It was when she realize that  She couldn't feel her hand!she look down and she saw her left hand filled with bandage and her other hand is full of tube transporting  blood inside her , than she look down at her feet , caught her by surprise , right at the bottom of her bed there is brand new set of paint brush and next to it was a beautiful box which holds over 30 colours of acrylic paint, 1-6 straight brush and round brush, also the fan brush were there, those are the tools Edson were fixing for her , and made some new for her , at that split second she thought of Edson " I wonder where he is " she said to herself, wait ... What happen, how Long have I slept , then she remembered the image of jack raping her then she start to remember what happened till Edson saved her and got STAB ! Yes ! He got stab ! Where is he ?is he okay ?i need to see him right away!"than the doctor came in and check on her status , she ask the doctor about Edson , the doctor hadn't answered her question , he just said ' your left hand will be fine if you give it some time , but if next times you bleed again like this I won't able to help you, and about the incident I 
have sent your injury report to the police already hope you can charge that asshole , any future questions?'
"Where did this came from?" She pointed to her painting tools at her bottom of her bed. "the guy who came with you gave it to you , I think his name is ... Start with E ..."the doctor puzzle ..'"Can I see him now ?" Ariel ask with excitement . "yeah sure thing you can go see him he is just at the next room !"the doctor answered roughly and walked away 


Ariel tried to get off the bed ,but little did she know the nurse gave her some Morphine  before she woke up and look for Edson , at last she finally found him and she walked next to his bed and saw that  he was sleeping , than Ariel started speaking to him "what happen ? Why are you like this ?" Than the doctor came in and saw Ariel , Ariel ask him immediately" what happened to him.?"ask Ariel anxiously the voice of her is filled with worriedness .The doctor tell her "he is fine ,but just need to rest for a bit  since he lost too much blood and he was carrying you to hospital. Normal people will 
already faint but somehow he managed to made it through consider it a miracle ,you must mean so much to him .' The doctor say it and walked away ,Ariel turn back to Edson and ask him "why you do this for me" , as she fell asleep beside his bed because of the morphine 
The nurse gave her earlier and as soon as Ariel slept Edson woke up from the sleep and found her sleeping next to him quietly as he brushes her hair softly with his hand and she woke up startled with a sweet feeling within her  head and was about to leave when Edson grab her hand just in time and Ariel look at Edson blushing and Edson smiled and said" thanks a lot Ariel"

Then the reality comes, jack lawyer and his mother come to ariel's room “ Are you the girl my boy insult ?”jack's mom ask without any emotion.”it was more than insult ! Who are you ?” Ariel said angrily and confuse , jack's mom just put up her hand and wave to the lawyer ,”hi,my name is Mr light, I'm jack's family lawyer ,I'm here to tell you a good news ..”Mr light performer introduce himself and interrupted by Ariel ,” what GOOD could bring from 
your Ass family ?!?” Ariel said with anger” don't you dare insult our family !you little filthy bitch ! You're just a poor girl who have no manners !” Jack's mom defend her family “Hey !stop saying that ! Her manner is thousand better than your son, at least she won't stab around people with a knife !”” Who dare shout...oh you ...I was going to look for you ,oh ! Not yet introduce I'm !”jack's mom stop speaking because Edson just walked by her didn't even look at her and walk to Ariel side , she put back her hand that she thought she was going to shake Edson hand “ Now ! You will say anything in front of my lawyer I bring with Mrs shanthi , “looks like I don't need to introduce “Mrs shanthi said .”no problem let get start! Ms Ariel , I'm truly sorry about what happens to you, and we wanna to make it up to you ,we wanna to settle for this .””you mean you want her to stop charging you son so he could get away from it !”Edson say it very angry that he hold his fist up ready to launch anytime ,”Edson ?”Mrs shanthi stop him with a gentle warming tone ,” let continue , I was saying we wanna to made good a loss ,if you agree on discharge on jack , I ASSURE you will be RECOVER from this indecent right away” Mr light saying it with 
some strong words within ,and take out a contract with the terms and the amount of jack's family going to pay, Ariel pick it up and read awhile and say no ,Mr light were startle for a moment and said he will give her more time and let her consider again , Mr light and jack's mom leave 
“Don't mind I take a look right ?” Ms shanthi ask nicely ,”yes, you may !” Ariel say it with sweet smile ,after ms shanthi look after it “ no offence, but why you didn't take it ? It not a small amount ! You could have a bright future within this money ,you need it in you collage , no offence but according your family status ?” Ms shanthi say it with surprise ,”I think it not me to take charge to help him , I think the judge will have know what to do, he is underage after all (jack is just high school still under 18 even he do something against the law still don't need to go to jail )” Ariel say it with forgiveness .”are you sure you want to do this ? it going it be harsh  , you did have a high chance of winning but that lawyer will make you a hard time ,as you said he is underage and in this case I can see they are going to blame on his mental circumstances cause in this indecent , that will make the judge just follow the laws” ms shanthi say it with 
professional advice “Well … What can I do ? Just take the money ?” Ariel ask helplessly “hey he may can get away with the charge you put on him , but remember me ?” He point at his stomach and full of words he wanna to spread from his mouth .” I might have a way to make him make it up to you …

After an hour Mr light and jack's mom come and ask Ariel the same question  “ Ms Ariel have you made your mind ?” Mr light asked “No!” Ariel said it with determinedly “ Are … Are you sure ? We can add another ten thousand !” Mr light said it very fast .” I'll discharge the charges by adding one more term in the contract ,I want Jack apologise face to face to me and apologise letter , BOTH formerly !” Ariel say it very staunch.” You this ! Who you think you are ? I won't agree on this !” Jack's mom say it very angrily. “Give us a minute” Mr light say it politely . After a minute “ ms Ariel we will accept your terms , do you agree on the settlement ?” “Yes, I've accept the terms” Ariel said . After signing it they were about to leave ,”hey mom , still have me ,remember ?” Edson say it behind her ear with smile.I believe we will see each other on court ! Since you don't want my money !” Jack's mom say it mean and low, “is not I don't want your money , is you cannot afford it, if you think you're rich ? Think again !” Edson say it with threat tone .



Throughout the days living tighter in the hospital they became closer and closer to each other and the more they know each other the more positive Edson became  ,"Just to let you know, friends does mean a lot ,which is why you need to look for a real friend but not random guys who makes you feels cooler .You know Edson,when you harm or bully people ,what do you feel ?"Ariel said "nothing, I feel nothing, I don't feel great or happy at all .I feel like I'm the best cause I am strong that I can beat up other as they are so weak and cannot fight back but then, when I saw them being afraid of me, I  don't think I'm alive and so I started to feel the thought of I need to pinch them harder harder harder to let them know I'm the fear, I'm the one who they should treat me as God 
"Edson said with no sorrow 
Ariel answer " but then ? Anyone look at you ? Did anyone admire  you ? Anyone see you ? To make people know you and treat you respect , you have to earn it ! Not by bullying  them but  by respecting them first , base on social respect ! Have Those punks ever respect you ? All they ever wanted do to  hang out with you just for the sake of have you in their group of bullies, I know you can feel it deep in your heart that why you want help, all you need to have is the right light switch  !" Edson look at her surprised with what he just heard  and Ariel ask "what ? Do you get it ?" Edson suddenly kiss her ! Ariel was shock and slap his face" what the Fuck was that?" , Edson "I thought you said the right light switch  all I though is kissing you...owww ! That hurt ! ""well ! Think again !" Ariel roll her eyes and laugh. 

On other days Ariel asked why you never talk ? Edson what u mean by I never talk? I do ... Talk , Like talking about  ..." Edson said it without even thinking about it.  " See !you don't talk and I think I know why. You don't have a friend and you have no Idea how to speak of your emotion , all you think is punch punch punch and 
thinking that punching  can help but let me tell you, fist don't talk, your heart do , talk to me  and let me know and let it out !" Ariel convince him calmly 


They both got out of hospital at the same time , as they walk out of the hospital door they felt the fresh air of autumn as the cool wind blows and leaves gently fall from the trees nearby , the cool wind blows through her shoulder and her long silky hair floats in the refreshing air. Ariel look up at Edson and  saw him looking at her with a few tears of joy on his eyelashes in his blue eyes he found out that Ariel and the autumn fit perfectly , they both, fall in love with autumn , but they never tell ...


It's been awhile since autumn came  , the wind is howling, they to sticker together more , than he ask Ariel ' can you stay longer after school today ? I want to ask you something ..'' Why can't you ask now ?' Ariel asked confusedly. "Cause I want to be formal " said 
Edson filled with secretive and excitement ." Where you want to met ?"asked Ariel with curiously  " let's just meet at the classroom !"

After school Ariel stayed at the class waiting for Edson , she looking at the window, it's sunset, that sunset was different than the sunset she looked at normal days, it feels romance for some reason in Ariel hearts.  Ariel heard knocking on the door , when she turn her head and saw Edson standing there with a extremely smart looking suit with the sunset shine on him all dressing up as if he is going to a party .Ariel was amazed and surprise that Edson has changed a lot.Edson walked to her and ask , "my lady may I have a honor to ask you out to be my partner on the christmas ball at the weekend?" Edson ask like a gentleman . Ariel was shocked without thinking sensibly she whisper "yes..." 

The great day is getting closer as Ariel is so excited about it ,she couldn't stop imagine the experience that is going to happen , she spent all her poker money on her ball dress ,  she have a feeling that what she had been waiting for years is going to become reality , same as  Edson he  keep practicing it , but one thing for sure: he don't need to worry about the cost of his suit 




Finally the night has come ,when Edson were waiting at the hall, waiting for her ,he was wearing a black suit with a tux shirt with a light blue tie . it was a cold night ,winter has finally arrive 
 The moment she came Edson was froze ,she was dressed in a purple glaze shine, and sparkle in second layer , matching her eyes , low shoulder to make her more grace , she walked to him slowly Edson has almost forgot what he had been practicing,the haters at the side were stopped because of her stunning look with a beautiful Silky curl bronze hair and a slight reflection of the moon light .At the ball , the haters aware shocked for what they have seen and seem to start regretting what happened and deep in their minds they start to regret not hanging out with her, when they saw she walk towards Edson, they were jealous of him more than before ever ,he asked "may I my lady ?", she graciously said "yes",they dance so romantically even themselves didn't believe it, almost the end of the ball , they walked to a harbour that beside the river and right under the moonlight , Edson kneel down and took the flowers which he hidden carefully under the table at the night before when he prepared . Ariel was already started to cry and her tears start wolfling in her eyes, her waterproof makeup make her tears stay on her lashes making her shiny eyes shown under the grey genial moon light , Edson look up " can you be my gir.... Ah " A girl come out of nowhere and grab Edson so close that he couldn't breath " you ! Come with me ! I thought you promise to dance with me! You said it last night when we were together !" the clock strikes twelve and the bell rang ,She was dragging him away into the crowd, Edson try to say something but the bell was so loud that ariel can't hear a word,when he walk away , she counted the steps he take , Ariel stand there waiting ...waiting ... Waiting ... The moment he left it started to snow ,She keeps waiting even if everyone is gone , the haters laugh at her before they go away, said this is what they expect , no one likes her, till the ball end Edson didn't come back , her mom finally call her and tell her come home to pack up ,she had a little secret that no one in the school knows about she is moving , she is moving near to her college she is going to study , she will leave this town forever ,because of her record in this town is not good , and the deal she made with jackass lawyer ,she walked to her home with her heavy feet , it like every steps she took is stapling her heart towards Edson, she count the steps same that Edson take . Now he is taken , there is her , he stay with her the last night , and he once promised to that girl he will dance with her …’ Ariel keep thinking about it. Butshe don't know the truth..



"No" was the first word that Edson said when he woke up the next day waking up at her sister's room was the least expected , he immediately remember he was dancing with Ariel ! What happens to her ? He thought thinking back that night ... He left Ariel alone ... Standing there ... Waiting ... He started to run , run to Ariel house with all his might hoping  that she will understand him, that she was his sister and he was forced to keep drinking alcohol if not he can't come back to her but after few drink he start feeling wobbly and forget about her ,the next thing he knows is he wakeups at his sister's room. 




Finally , he stop at Ariel home front door , he saw the banner hanging 'For Sale ' he didn't believe his eyes , he go on knocking , no one answer , he turn down and sit at the floor he started to felt so angry he started to think of punching someone , but then he remember what Ariel said " you make someone happy you'll also be happy" ,he change his thought and stand up ready to go home , then he saw something under the carpet , and go on and grab it ,it a letter written his name on it , he immediately open it and start reading:

Dear Edson,
    When you read this letter I'm already on my way, it been great to spend time with you for this year, if you wondering my new address , I don't know , I haven't know it yet , which is why I don't want you to look for me anymore , spend more time with you cute girlfriend ,she is so pretty , you deserve her better than me , I live my life , now live yours, bye !
P.s I wait at the ball , I was going to tell you , but you never come back

Wish you have a happy life

Love BestFriend
Ariel

Edson start to feel so sorrow about it , he have never cry again since Ariel was there for him , but now Ariel is gone he stared to cry  , he cry so hard he almost couldn't breath anymore , he tried to stop but his tears just won't stop , he started to punching the walls until his hand is full of blood , the people on the streets saw him and call the ambulances  , he got in the same hospital again, and everyday is like living in hell for him.

After a month he wanna to cry but his heart is already drained , no more tears came out , he worked hard on his school work and study harder ,never speak to anyone, and finally he get all subject from E to an A, now he have a chance to go on collage , a chance to go out of a small town and spread his wings go outside the world to study, he went to a collage that far from home and he don't want to leave cause he is always hoping Ariel will come back , but then he decided to move on...

After few months, it spring . Edson was accepted by the best college in the United States of America ,one day ,He was ready to have his lunch when he over heard a familiar sound ,as he try to listen he heard a canteen plate fell on the floor ! He saw lot of people surround there and laugh loudly, he go on and try to take a look, he saw a girl fall on her own food and all wet cause the Bulliers are pouring the drink on her , then Edson couldn't be a bystander anymore , because that remain him the old days he been thorough,, he walk up and stop that guy pouring the drink on her," who do you think you are ? New punk?!?" Said Leon ." I think you should stop this !" Said Edson within all anger he have all in, but he calm down and he startled when he hear the girl whisper " Why...?"he look down and saw Ariel was there and looking up at him with unexpected eyes , " Ariel ? It you ?why did you leave? come let's talk somewhere else " Edson speak and her hold her hand so tight she can't even try to move her hand , they ran together then they got in a classroom where there is no one in there , he locked the door ," I told you not to look for me !" Ariel said angrily ." I didn't ! I tried but I couldn't " Edson said so happy cause he finally see her," than how do you know I'm here , and why are you here ?"Ariel asked with worried." I don't know I just hear you plate broke and I go look , and I work hard on my studies because I want to live a life like you said  and I did it ! Here I am !" He is still so happy about seeing her ." What about your girlfriend ? She will miss you !"Ariel still don't believe him ." Oh shoot ! She is not my girlfriend silly , she is my sister , before that night she ask me will I dance with her I said yes cause I don't want her to cry , than she make me promise !" Edson explain quickly ." Is that mean .. Ahm!" He drag her close suddenly and Lean his head forward so quick, standing theatre stay froze , in middle of a classroom with no one inside they kissed, she didn't slap him this time but she is still shocked , but she didn't want to push him she started to close her eyes and Edson saw her didn't push him he close his eyes also , the sound from outside the classroom door start to pass away all they can hear is each other's heart beat ,Edson get so close to her that he could smell her perfume, that is making him more excited , she smell a bit of his sweat but it wasn't so strong that she care about it, all she cares is the movement of his lips , it strong but gentle , that making her feel so safe that she feels like she can do this forever, their lips locked together and Edson started to put his hands under her clothes and started to touch her skins , Ariel puts her hand around his neck, that he carry her on a table letting her down gently.ah !, BANG BANG BANG !!!!!!!! The lunch bells rings , Edson and Ariel wakeups and realise what have they done " will you be my girlfriend ?" Edson kneel down and continue the speech he didn't finish last time ." YES YES of coz !" Ariel said with happiness , the door start banging cause the student start to come back and found out the door was locked , when Edson go out he saw Leon the guy who was bullying Ariel , leon was shock and walked back few steps but Edson stare at him and walk forward , and gave him a bruise eye


The season  End ...? You want to ?

Written by TigerDevil and ManInSuit 

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